FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby wirez » Thu Sep 02, 2010 8:05 pm

offkey lickedbeatz wrote:@ wirez - really feeling the melody you've got in the intro, got alot of really sweet sounds in there. percussion is nice too but i think that 2nd oscillator could do with tweaking as its a bit rough, breakdowns heavy too, really atmospheric.


Thanks man! Glad you're feeling the melody in the intro and the breakdown, the 'hooks', atmosphere/feeling and musicality are some of the main things I focus on :) Sorry to hear you're not feeling the bass tone though!

Will leave some feedback for you on the cloud!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby wirez » Thu Sep 02, 2010 8:07 pm

F-R-E-D wrote:@Wirez I love the entire track but at 1:50 is getting really really nice


Big up yourself mate! Glad you're feeling those vibes :D

Will leave some feedback for your track on the cloud! :wink:
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby Capture pt » Thu Sep 02, 2010 9:32 pm

This is a remix I done for a good friend of mine, Akema. Who is on a bunch of labels and some of you may have heard his tunes....

http://soundcloud.com/capturepoint/akem ... oint-remix
http://soundcloud.com/capturepoint/akema-sacred-capture-point-remix


Should be out to buy soon, on a top secret band new label ;)

dub dub dub dub dub dub dub techno dub dub dub dub techno dub
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garethom wrote:Do get some funny stuff occasionally man like "live sex recording mixed with hard electro/dubstep". It was on a self-release called "2 in the pink, 1 in the stink".


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby Chris mack » Thu Sep 02, 2010 9:33 pm

http://soundcloud.com/chromaticnz/jungle-fever-original-mix

Posted in Dead August thread, Feedback appreciated!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby ponte_ricky » Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:24 am

http://soundcloud.com/expresident/too-fat

new track i did today, would love some feedback thanks
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby ponte_ricky » Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:43 am

@chris mack. nice beat, love the subby wobbles

@capture pt. woah this is deep. really like the vocal parts. love how dark it is. definitly my thing, will definitly wanna get hold of this when it's released
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby Capture pt » Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:53 am

ponte_ricky wrote:
@capture pt. woah this is deep. really like the vocal parts. love how dark it is. definitly my thing, will definitly wanna get hold of this when it's released



cheers man, appreciate it. should be some similar bits from myself soon :p
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby purplepirate123 » Fri Sep 03, 2010 1:00 am

@ Dack, Meaty as hell man. I love it! Good decision to through the drums into double time too!
@ Capture digging the vocals on this track man!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby purplepirate123 » Fri Sep 03, 2010 1:07 am

@chris mack I like it, but I feel like you could've done a better job with the wobble rate variation.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby purplepirate123 » Fri Sep 03, 2010 1:11 am



My first tune. bumped from dead august thread. Appreciate feedback, no matter how harsh!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby GiMPY » Fri Sep 03, 2010 3:31 am

purplepirate123 wrote:

My first tune. bumped from dead august thread. Appreciate feedback, no matter how harsh!


Good vibe, the vocals sit in the mix really well and fit the style of the song. I wouldn't filter the bass so much and maybe change the sound up every now and then with a different more gritty bass; if you're going to make that the focal point of the song you gotta keep it constantly interesting and really make it stand out. just my 2 cents though!!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby Sirius » Fri Sep 03, 2010 3:44 am

hopefully ive fixd it up abit... put alot more bottom end in there.. shit should be pumping hard now ay!
all the comments have been massive! everybody is luvn this type of dubstep ah.
deep & dark as fak!!

chea!!
http://soundcloud.com/soulshynchyld/harakeke
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby GiMPY » Fri Sep 03, 2010 3:52 am

Sirius wrote:hopefully ive fixd it up abit... put alot more bottom end in there.. shit should be pumping hard now ay!
all the comments have been massive! everybody is luvn this type of dubstep ah.
deep & dark as fak!!

chea!!
http://soundcloud.com/soulshynchyld/harakeke


I feel like the track never reaches a climactic point. It's very progressive and sounds really good, the mix is great and that bass pulse that swoops in and out every couple bars is awesome. But throughout the whole track I'm waiting for it to build up and drop into this massive grimey bass (at least thats what I'm waiting for), maybe try changing it up a bit at some point because for 4+ minutes it stays the same a lot. good work though

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby GiMPY » Fri Sep 03, 2010 3:57 am

This isn't exactly a new track, it's the first one I ever did from earlier this year but none of my tracks have ever really been reviewed or commented on so I thought I'd start posting them around to see what people thought.

The mix isn't great, pretty muddy and repetitive, but let me know what you think.

http://soundcloud.com/gimpy/mitote

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby Olux » Fri Sep 03, 2010 7:15 am

Hey everyone.
I'd love any feedback for my new tune. Happy to return feedback when i'm back on l8er.
Cheers dudes.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby Tese man » Fri Sep 03, 2010 7:39 am

Dacks wrote:
check the filth



The bass is nice and phat bro! :D Only the breakbeat section could use a bit more dynamics too keep it interesting! keep it up bro
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby Tese man » Fri Sep 03, 2010 7:43 am

purplepirate123 wrote:
My first tune. bumped from dead august thread. Appreciate feedback, no matter how harsh!


It seems that quite a few sounds are clashing with each other. I think you should try to fix the mixdown :wink:
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby Tese man » Fri Sep 03, 2010 7:48 am

steeze wrote:

My new tune, posted in the old thread but didnt get any replys, it's a bit heavier than my other stuff.
http://soundcloud.com/steeze-1/fight-song
Any crits shall be returned, thanks :)


Oh hell yes! the synths remind me of some of those epic 80s songs! nice one bro!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby Tese man » Fri Sep 03, 2010 7:59 am

http://soundcloud.com/tese-man/chinamode-brainfister-tese-mans-brock-out-remix

Here's a track I finished recently. I waited for the september thread on purpose, because i figured no one would give me feedback on the old one! :(
Anyway, this is a remix i did of a killer track by my mate Chinamode.
Please leave honest feedback, I rather have you guys hating on this track than saying it's awesome. Unless you think it's awesome. Yeah...I think you guys get my drift :wink:
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Postby steeze » Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:54 am

Cheers to everyone who commented on my track, here's the returns I promised :)

@ Jaspervc Cool drums, im liking the double time feel. The lower end seems to dominate the mix a bit though, sounds a tad muddy, might just be my speakers though. I like the ethnic sounding synth, try mixing up the melody a bit more though gets a tad repetitive after a while. Good stuff though.

@ Sirius Nice atmospheric intro, a bit of reverb or delay on those cymbals would sound real nice. Im enjoyin the swung triplet aswell. Really dark feel to the whole track, pads are sounding lush too. I like the way it feels like it's building to something, good stuff.

@ Kievccs Really spooky pad in the intro, I'm liking how the chord doesnt change, it just kinda hangs there. I like the the reverb on the hats, and all the little bits of perc. Loving how the track leaves you constantly waiting for something but you dont lose interest. Final section is great aswell, real nice job here :)

@ Offkey lickedbeatz I like the delayed synths in the intro, wobbles sounding nice, if not a little generic. Sweet pads in the outro, good stuff man.

@ F-R-E-D Like the chilled out feel of the intro, I kinda like the vocal, has a haunting quality to it. Not really feeling the mid-rangey bass, it jumps out at you a bit too much, takes away from the feel of the track. Drums seem to get a tad repetitive, maybe try adding more hits as the track progresses and changing up the beat a bit.
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