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by jetpack
Wed Sep 25, 2013 2:43 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIP Thread - GIVE FEEDBACK TO OTHERS BEFORE POSTING!!!
Replies: 1548
Views: 258858

Re: WIP Thread - GIVE FEEDBACK TO OTHERS BEFORE POSTING!!!

@azuk: Definitely interesting. The drums, especially the snare, stand out a lot against the muddy, ambient leads. Not sure if that's intended, but it took the focus off of the bass and leads. What leads? Are you high man. By "leads" I meant the pad that is up front in the track. Relax, du...
by jetpack
Wed Sep 25, 2013 2:10 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIP Thread - GIVE FEEDBACK TO OTHERS BEFORE POSTING!!!
Replies: 1548
Views: 258858

Re: WIP Thread - GIVE FEEDBACK TO OTHERS BEFORE POSTING!!!

@azuk: Definitely interesting. The drums, especially the snare, stand out a lot against the muddy, ambient leads. Not sure if that's intended, but it took the focus off of the bass and leads. What leads? Are you high man. By "leads" I meant the pad that is up front in the track. Relax, du...
by jetpack
Tue Sep 24, 2013 5:45 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIP Thread - GIVE FEEDBACK TO OTHERS BEFORE POSTING!!!
Replies: 1548
Views: 258858

Re: WIP Thread - GIVE FEEDBACK TO OTHERS BEFORE POSTING!!!

@azuk: Definitely interesting. The drums, especially the snare, stand out a lot against the muddy, ambient leads. Not sure if that's intended, but it took the focus off of the bass and leads. @Mork-E: Really neat sounds you have there. Mix sounds tight. A breather somewhere would have been nice. The...
by jetpack
Mon Sep 02, 2013 10:31 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIP Thread - GIVE FEEDBACK TO OTHERS BEFORE POSTING!!!
Replies: 1548
Views: 258858

Re: WIP Thread - GIVE FEEDBACK TO OTHERS BEFORE POSTING!!!

@HimanshuVikal: Nice progression. The sub bass and kick are a bit clashing on my end. The sub sounds nice, the kick sounds slightly distorted. Try varying the velocity to give a bit of a human touch to the kicks on the triplet parts. It's a bit robotic. Sounds like a nice intro/build to something hu...
by jetpack
Wed Feb 20, 2013 2:04 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIP Thread - GIVE FEEDBACK TO OTHERS BEFORE POSTING!!!
Replies: 1548
Views: 258858

Re: WIP Thread - GIVE FEEDBACK TO OTHERS BEFORE POSTING!!!

@mthrfnk: 1st WIP sounds like Heads Will Roll (A-Trak Remix), but I love that progression.
by jetpack
Tue Nov 06, 2012 3:01 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIP Thread - GIVE FEEDBACK TO OTHERS BEFORE POSTING!!!
Replies: 1548
Views: 258858

Re: WIP Thread - GIVE FEEDBACK TO OTHERS BEFORE POSTING!!!

@skerrick: You should know what is good and what is not, listening to random people on the internet could be detrimental to your music. haha.. If its deep then im going to be missing out on alot of stuff on laptop speakers. :::raw:fourfour:: Kind of interesting beat at the beginning, not too keen o...
by jetpack
Sat Nov 03, 2012 1:44 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIP Thread - GIVE FEEDBACK TO OTHERS BEFORE POSTING!!!
Replies: 1548
Views: 258858

Re: WIP Thread - GIVE FEEDBACK TO OTHERS BEFORE POSTING!!!

@Praxisaxis: Dug "The Retrofit" a lot. I kept wanting to hear a big snare on some downbeats, but I liked the track. Percussion on "Electro-Mechanical" was spot on. @ehbrums1: Mix sounds on. 1:04 seems tough to fit another sound there. It's full sounding, for the minimal feel, but...
by jetpack
Wed Oct 24, 2012 4:39 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 595428

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@Globalz: Nice sound choices. Mix sounds good in the headphones. Really digging it. @Blak: Not a huge fan of the intro. I actually like the melody and the distorted lead bass, but the mix just isn't there yet. Work on the volumes and eqing of your sounds. @Houston Weather: 1:00 is a catchy part. Coo...
by jetpack
Thu Oct 04, 2012 9:12 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 595428

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@dmtsbreakz:

Diggin your style. Cool vibe from both tracks,
by jetpack
Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:35 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 595428

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@Jetpack: Love your song and the beat, but I feel it's a little repetitive at times. You lost me around 1:37 but I started to get drawn back in when the ill came back in at the change up, maybe add in something small there or shorten it slightly so it's less of the same loops. @Smore's Cool tune, I...
by jetpack
Wed Aug 29, 2012 2:43 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 595428

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@Jetpack : Could you show me an example of what you meant by "Maybe add a high pass filter on the drums that builds up to the drop. The intro seems drug out, try shortening it. Also, try introducing the drums one at a time with the kick added last. Helps build anticipation." See, I am not...
by jetpack
Wed Aug 29, 2012 1:55 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 595428

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@Jetpack : Could you show me an example of what you meant by "Maybe add a high pass filter on the drums that builds up to the drop. The intro seems drug out, try shortening it. Also, try introducing the drums one at a time with the kick added last. Helps build anticipation." http://www.yo...
by jetpack
Wed Aug 29, 2012 1:10 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 595428

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@Jetpack - Cheers, I did that too and it does drop better now, thanks. you should call yourself the professor, or the scientist. Your wip is very catchy, i could see it being very popular with the masses. I wish i could get my kick drum to sit right on top like that, been trying to work sidechainin...
by jetpack
Tue Aug 28, 2012 11:14 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 595428

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

Vader340mk2 wrote:Thnks for the reply.

@Jetpack - Genius!! I just did what you said with the pad and i think it sounds a lot more eerie now and kinda fills out the drop too!!
Sounds good, man! Add a drawn out, reverbed crash at the drop, too. Give it more emphasis.
by jetpack
Tue Aug 28, 2012 10:54 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 595428

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@jetpack : The high end sounds good, nice and crisp, and the sub, has a nice low end /) What do you suggest for my intro? Any advice will be appreciate :3 Maybe add a high pass filter on the drums that builds up to the drop. The intro seems drug out, try shortening it. Also, try introducing the dru...
by jetpack
Tue Aug 28, 2012 10:10 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 595428

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@SMOR3S: Nice drop. The intro lacked any excitement for the drop for me. I like the vocals, but the main reverse takes me out of the song a bit. Maybe pick parts to not have any vocals. @difference: Really digging it. Nice modulation and bass design. Sounds mixed properly. Maybe add a different bass...
by jetpack
Tue Aug 28, 2012 5:42 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 595428

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@JimBeaux: Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on the thin bass.

Your WIP: Dark and heavy. Almost ready for some rapping over it. Overall sound is nice. Maybe some variation throughout, but vocals would fill it out as well.
by jetpack
Tue Aug 28, 2012 5:35 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 595428

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@Cubicle: Thanks for the feedback. Did you mean the overall low end of the song? Or the low end of the lead or sub, specifically? Your WIP: Great intro. Mix and sound selection is spot on. The only thing I would change is the bass choice, and the progression of the bass. All the pads and synths are ...
by jetpack
Mon Aug 27, 2012 9:46 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 595428

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@Trapdoor: Huge sound. Bass sounds heavy and cutting. 2nd drop is massive. Good stuff. @Nokko: Good start. Gotta work on the levels and the sidechained synth is a little off. Try adding a snappy snare along with the white noise snare you have and bring the snare(s) up. Keep at it. @Echoi: Nice bass....
by jetpack
Mon Aug 27, 2012 2:16 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: Does anybody have massive
Replies: 14
Views: 1338

Re: Does anybody have massive

PMed you. Also sent you 5 completed, unreleased Skrillex songs for you to drop at your next neighborhood rave.