Civil_twilight - River
What do you like, what don't you like?
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Ever heard of sidechaining?

This was horrible. Sry, mate.

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yeah, its kinda the whole the point not be like every fucking idiot out there, that sits alone with fl studio and beats off to hentai. Obv its not the whole song ;) dunno if i'm gonna use a pad for the intro, i quite like it as it is. But that implies that you agree with me ofc. thanks for the reply...

nahh, dubish. Yeah i know, it lacks bass, fixing that.

So this is pretty much it: I've got a lot of blended feelings about this track, from loads of different people. Personally I think its still 2 messy, but it has potential. So, my question: What can I improve, what don't you like and how do I improve? http://soundcloud.com/fredrikvee/alienzzz/s-3DU4I...

http://soundcloud.com/fredrikvee/smooth ... bidden-vee

I also don't mind if you share it. I Desperately need publicity! Thanks!!!

thx man!

Not dubstep tho.
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thoughts?