Hi everyone, I'm ZyRTeK and this is my 1st thread on DubStepForum!
I would love to read some of your thoughts on my first dubstep-y/electro demo-tune:

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Thanks for listening!

Like the mood, but it's quite repetitive. Maybe add some variations, and also some build-up/breakdown elements to give it more structure.

Sweet sub!
Love the mood - kinda 'driving-all-night-no-destination' feel

Nice old-skool vibe! Funny melodies. Good title too.

Aaaaah, the breakbeats, I like - and the atmospheric part as well !!

Yeah, the raspy synth is sticking out too much - and it's lacking a bit of warmth to fill it up
But I do like how you made this a 'song'. Intro, break, variations etc. Good work!

This is nice! I love all your small glitchy-variations.
Maybe add some melodic variations as well? Cause I kinda feel that your 'production' is better than the 'musical' aspect ...
Good of you to make something wobble-less - wobbles are overrated anyway

Your song feels very 'looped'.
Try to get away from that 'looped' feel. Create your own rhythm's and riffs, or slice up your samples and work on adding your own variations. It'll spice it up!

Liking the sub!
Maybe add some elements (sounds, samples, fragments, glitches) to add some variation, accents and general 'freshness'. It's a bit 'stale'.
Keep it up!