love the sparse melody, the womp in the bass, and the vocal edits
when the bass first drops (around 1.10), i think the deep frequencies would sound good on all the notes, like the first one of every bar
really dig the atmosphere of this sound, will stay tuned
nuff respect

really like the melody for the verse part where the wobble cuts
and sweet overall groove!
there could be a heavier buildup for the part where he repeats 'passport and ...no we dont need no answer'
overall very dope

stroke of the pen is great
especially digging the nice drum pattern and violin towards the end

very nice, great idea using taiko drums in dubs
very heavy