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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by amphibian » Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:56 am

reignz wrote:- Dubplateguy: The drums need some more work, they're kinda getting soaked by your bassline. The bass is nice, maybe some fattening up with some effects (notch filter?) i liked the 8 bit sound, gave it abit a surreal feeling.

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Mate you're really on your way to becoming a top producer. Really solid hard tech dub. If I were you - I would get in touch with Boot from Australia (also half of The Abyss) as this is the kind of dub he loves to rinse :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Conflux » Fri Aug 06, 2010 6:27 am

@reignz - Nice one mate. Production on your midrange is real nice and great variation throughout the track. Enjoyed it!

@pain - Intro is a bit wack to me. Have you tried reversing some of those pad samples. Like the progression throughout and nice work on the drums nice groove and not too busy.

@dubplateguy - Intro sucks in my option dude. When it drops it gets way better. I would try to beef up your drum samples especially the snare, it sounds a bit weak. Overall i think its a pretty good job. I found it kinda dragged on a bit though but thats probably just my opinion.

@CollisionCourse - Nice and subby! The drums are good but i think you need to go through and try to do some more small variations. I agree with gombles, i was expecting something else to kick in after that second drop. Nice work!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by reignstep » Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:08 am

amphibian wrote:
reignz wrote:- Dubplateguy: The drums need some more work, they're kinda getting soaked by your bassline. The bass is nice, maybe some fattening up with some effects (notch filter?) i liked the 8 bit sound, gave it abit a surreal feeling.

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Latest work, some feedback wud be great
Mate you're really on your way to becoming a top producer. Really solid hard tech dub. If I were you - I would get in touch with Boot from Australia (also half of The Abyss) as this is the kind of dub he loves to rinse :)

Solid production.
Thanks man, I think I still got a long road ahead of me but who knows :) I'm most def. gonna get in touch with him, thanks for the reference :!:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by maxtone » Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:16 am

Hey all, heres my latest tune :D

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edit: apologies for the lack of feedback on other tunes my internet is capped so il check some out either tmrw or the next day when it goes back to norm

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by TheBreadMan » Fri Aug 06, 2010 10:06 am

So this is my very first dubstep track, I just mastered it down, and slowed it down a little bit. The track is not for all, but this was my VERY first track i ever produced on my own.

Oh yeah, and if you are either a fan of my ish, or you are already following me on soundcloud, be sure to open my soundcloud from below, and I have another Soundcloud that has only tracks or mash ups ALL 320's and ALL tracks have been mastered.

Let me know what you guys on the reworked and mastered version..

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Matthew-B » Fri Aug 06, 2010 2:46 pm

My latest tune: Warsaw 44
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Post by alexwright » Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:00 pm

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Hi everyone this is another one from me, hope you enjoy and say what you think of it!

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Post by jstick » Fri Aug 06, 2010 7:03 pm

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Post by Ongelegen » Fri Aug 06, 2010 7:16 pm

TheBreadMan wrote:So this is my very first dubstep track, I just mastered it down, and slowed it down a little bit. The track is not for all, but this was my VERY first track i ever produced on my own.

Oh yeah, and if you are either a fan of my ish, or you are already following me on soundcloud, be sure to open my soundcloud from below, and I have another Soundcloud that has only tracks or mash ups ALL 320's and ALL tracks have been mastered.

Let me know what you guys on the reworked and mastered version..

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not really my style, but think the kick is not cutting thru very well, besides the wobble is waaay too loud in comparison to the rest. The snare could also use some beefin up, cuz it's just a white noise now, try layering some punchy snare underneath it.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by S0VEREIGNTY » Fri Aug 06, 2010 7:53 pm

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New track, decided to let my ringmod sleep on this one, thanks for listening!

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Post by suckabeat » Fri Aug 06, 2010 11:17 pm

@SOVEREIGNTY: Thats a cool track man, I like the melodies flying around in the back ground! If i could suggest anything, maybe tighten up the drums a wee tad, and add in some extra percussion + hats, otherwise - i dont really know what to say, sweet track!!

@jstick: I really like the drums that youve got in ur track, real steppy :mrgreen: The mid-range wobble gets a bit much after a while, would be awesome to see a couple of different bass-synths dropped in to mix it up!

@alexwright: Sick tune man, but i'd love to see what you could pull off if you pay some more attention to your drums - with that bassline and some fiiilthy drums, i could see this track becoming a TUNE! :lol: Btw, i like the ambient pads that you have inbetween, contrasts well.

@Matthew-B: I like the dark piano going on in the background, but I found myself listening - waiting for something to happen... It would be cool to see what you could do if you hussle your off-beat drums into something more rythmic, and maybe drop in a bassline at the same time!

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Post by X HertZ » Sat Aug 07, 2010 1:36 am

@ suckabeat
'BLUNTWIP' nice minimal flavour, good feel. my head is bobbin like a chicken.
'Zombiez'Dirty, grimey, sick b line bro, nice.
may be a few lil hi swirly fx in the intros could be nice on both a these other than that... phat stuff here!

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likin 'unhooked' deep, dark, ambient intro nice break. can put you in deep profound thought!!!

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Nice mix of rythm at the start and depth @ got my ed noddin then switched all nice and soulful the sax is bootyfull. (may be a couple more SFX mainly on parts wid less melody) likey like it (Please Leave comments when you post)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by kievccs » Sat Aug 07, 2010 3:29 am

@Matthew-B What happen to the sub?? :( Dubstep is not dubstep without some nasty subs on top man. if you fix that probably your song is gonna kick some ass

@Reign You know how to work those midranges very good, but i didn't liked the way you worked on the vocal arrangement, but it's a matter of tastes i didn't like it that much but surely everyone enjoyed it. great track indeed!


This is another old track from myself, the shakers are a little high but it's irreversible cause i've lost most of my music proyects including this.

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Anyway enjoy and feel free to comment and grab yourself a copy! :t:

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Post by EraREdux » Sat Aug 07, 2010 6:57 am

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Post by icebagg » Sat Aug 07, 2010 9:22 am

kievccs wrote: This is another old track from myself, the shakers are a little high but it's irreversible cause i've lost most of my music proyects including this.

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Anyway enjoy and feel free to comment and grab yourself a copy! :t:
Oh man! very beautiful! I love the intro, that synth hits the ears so nicely. I love the drum pattern, its got that shuffly beat which i love to hear because its not the most common on the forums but is essential to diversify the dubstep sound. The delay is working very nicely and i love that sample of the woman singing that pops up here and there. this was breath of fresh air for sure! Having said that, I think the drums sound a bit too busy and i think its the kick thats doing it. I personally like less kick so you can focus more on the percussion, i think 1-3 kicks a beat is plenty to define the rhythm. When i am in the club this tends to irritate me (again this is just my preference do what you will with it) I like shuffly percussive dub but the key ingredient is the bassline, if your kicks are going off to rapidly it definitely takes away from the bassline. I cant really comment on the bass because im creepin up on 3am and have to keep my subs down (neighbor fucks). Overall tho man i really liked your track, definitely keep working on it!
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Post by icebagg » Sat Aug 07, 2010 9:41 am

alexwright wrote:Soundcloud

Hi everyone this is another one from me, hope you enjoy and say what you think of it!

Thanks []^_^[]

Nice track man, you got a lot of nice sounds going here, the drum pattern is tight. I like the synth you used for your wobble however I dont know how much i am digging the melody. Structure and breaks are right on and the intro is real soothing! Definitely was not expecting you to get grimy on me! I cant comment on the bass because i have to keep the subs off (creepin up on 3 am now). But I did enjoy the track, keep working on it tho!
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Post by icebagg » Sat Aug 07, 2010 9:44 am

OK YALL these are my pride and joys. Their "finished" but as always still workin on them but would love some feedback! give feedback on one, or both whatever. lemme know whats goooooooood. love you guys!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by CollisionCourse » Sat Aug 07, 2010 12:08 pm

@ homage
sub urban - im feelin the intro, and the little instrument stab you throw in here an there. the drop is fucking evil, some dark shit going down here, the drums are sounding fucking tight aswell. again the eeriness (sp) on the breakdown sets up the second drop noycely. one of the hi hats in coming in a little too much, but overall big tune. you got anything signed yet?

@ kiev
speak no more - iwas gonna say the shakers are coming through too much but i see you cant do much. suppose that makes all advice pretty worthless so ill tell what i like about it. love that background humming and that percussion goes well with the rest. also i like the little vocal stabs like that one that comes in at 0.55 & 1.09. overall its decent, good job.

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Post by daddy mchectic » Sat Aug 07, 2010 1:06 pm

Ahoy. Here's a track made by moi which features a rather nang MC called Olzord. Have a listen :D

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Galbm » Sat Aug 07, 2010 2:53 pm

My latest tune , Would like to get comments and replys :)
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