Erin M-W : 14XU (130)

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Erin M-W : 14XU (130)

Post by RKM » Tue May 12, 2015 9:23 am

yo first time posting tunes outside of the snh dubs thread, harsh criticism welcome, this is a new mixdown and edit of a slightly older tune

uk funky/130/grime/dubstep was what i was going for

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Re: Erin M-W : 14XU (130)

Post by NinjaEdit » Tue May 12, 2015 9:45 am

Could use more snare and vocals.
Maybe try an open hat after the beats and see if that helps the energy.
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Re: Erin M-W : 14XU (130)

Post by RKM » Tue May 12, 2015 10:29 am

cheers boss, it did have more vocals but a friend pointed out to me that they were out of key with the synth line, and i took them out cos they were clashing quite awkwardly, i get you on the energy front as well
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Re: Erin M-W : 14XU (130)

Post by particle-jim » Tue May 12, 2015 9:42 pm

the drums need to be more prominent in the mix, try some compression or something to get them to pop out a bit more, sounding nice overall though :)
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