sorry but the intro needs some more depth to it somehow, sweeps, fx, percussion, sub stabs? it just sounds too basic which can be good sometimes but in this it sounds sketchy. also the first bline you have after the drop could be nice and cheeky, reckon a little high pitched relaxed melody could do it there for you. It also does get pretty boring after a while, pretty much youve got the ideas there, it just needs some sort of 'flare' whether that be vox or whatever it will will just make it much more listenable
