Spot the G - Ponch (I try out subbass!)

[Ponch]

Hi guys! First of all thanks for all the help so far, really helped me advance as a producer. Heres my latest effort, I learned how to do subbass and I guess you call it shelve the frequenices so noting clashes and you can hear everything (atleast I think i did!)

This is still a work in progress and I need to add some effects and some sort of synth or melody for the intro and throughout the song, otherwise its almost done.
(Also not sure what to do with the breath samples, I kinda like the one at the drop and wanna keep that)
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[Ponch]

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[Ponch]

Bump once more! Would really like some feedback on this one!

[Ponch]

Bump again...

[SlumCity]

i like the breathe sample a lot at the drop but i think your right you dont need it all the way through the intro and breakdown.. as far as the main body goes you need to find a more satisfying groove for the wobbles. keep it simple and catchy. you can hear the sub for sure but its not melting my chest or anything...the mix is clean but there is no weight to it. now that youve got into eq'ing , ... read about compression and limiting its very important in getting your mixes bigger and badder.

[Ponch]

Thanks slumcty! Very helpful feedback, I get what youre saying, I need to start thinkig more musically with my songs... which I got a great idea to fix that up, Also ill make the subbass more oomphy now.... now that I leanred how to make it its really fun to turn out that heavy sub.