Paradigm "melody and chaos"(heavy dark experimental)

[paradigm001]

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[paradigm001]

I for some reason go to a 4 to the floor techno at th end of the tune, I wanted to keep that gong but at the same time I wanted to end it, so its just about 5 minutes. Keeping a framework going, any ideas?

[paradigm001]

anyone?

[paradigm001]

good bad or ugly?

[Bonz]

like i said in my comment on soundcloud, fits the song title perfectly.
the intro is very very nice. good work.
the drop needs alot more though....personally i always want my drop to be huge no matter what....but thats me.
overall good work...those stringy synths throughout it sound awesome.

[paradigm001]

Thanks man, there needs to be a lot of contrast for a big drop, I just think this didnt have the right kinda contrast. But thanks for the feedback! I showed a non dubstep friend of mine this tune and he said, it sounds like two songs and you have too many ideas, I said thats what dubstep is all about.

[Bonz]

Thanks man, there needs to be a lot of contrast for a big drop, I just think this didnt have the right kinda contrast. But thanks for the feedback! I showed a non dubstep friend of mine this tune and he said, it sounds like two songs and you have too many ideas, I said thats what dubstep is all about.

hahaha hilarious!!
well said dood.
yeh when i show non dub heads they look at me and say....its sorta just like a bunch of noises...and they have a point....... to an extent.
i guess it depends on whos listening.

[paradigm001]

Cool Cool...Yea jazz used to sound like a bunch of noise untill I started studying it. Its amazing whats hidden there in the music people cant relate it to anything they heard before so it sounds like noise.

Anyone else wanna give some quick feedback on my track?

[Bad Attitude]

Cool Cool...Yea jazz used to sound like a bunch of noise untill I started studying it. Its amazing whats hidden there in the music people cant relate it to anything they heard before so it sounds like noise.

Yeah, I love Venetaian Snares and most folks don't get it.

Your track though man, is ace, very dark and heavy.
The really distorted bass could maybe do with a little clean up, but thats personal taste.
Structure, melodies, atmosphere, all really good.
Outro is great too, I love a good outro.

[illestrait]

This is sick! I like it. Just like everyone else mentioned, the titled is perfect. Definitely sums up the track. Your sound is super clean keep it up.

[paradigm001]

Thanks for all the feedback guys, I really tried hard to push the limit of the bass in this one so its heavy as hell while still having that melody on top.

[ARTFX]

Thanks for all the feedback guys, I really tried hard to push the limit of the bass in this one so its heavy as hell while still having that melody on top.

Yeahh and you've managed to do that pretty well, good job!

[paradigm001]

thanks! Leave a soundcloud comment if ya can. thanks again!

[TheTomster]

Wow, that track is so amazing clean sounding! And even though your story of your friend saying it sounded like 2 songs might be true, it definitely flows very well. I love this track, it's practically flawless, great work!

[paradigm001]

Thanks Tomster! Leave a comment on soundcloud if you can. Dont worry Im bugging (begging) everyone to do that!

[TheTomster]

Thanks Tomster! Leave a comment on soundcloud if you can. Dont worry Im bugging (begging) everyone to do that!

Haha, already did! Gonna follow your stuff, it's quality material, you gave me some great advice yesterday as well. Thanks for that! My username on SoundCloud is Chooch.

[paradigm001]

anyone else care to listen and comment!?

[State of Bass Blog]

i like the section at 1.52 but most of your synths are missing a strong sub and some are missing bass altogether. Really wished you continued the 1.52 and developed that into a comprehensive song rather than mash together like 5 tracks that have little to no relation to each other. definitely thought this was going to be darker .

[paradigm001]

I see what your saying state of bass, Im kinda frustrated too. My songs never come out the way I want them too, they just follow one idea after another. Some like it some dont, im in the middle. The sub is there its just not blaring like on that one synth... I might develop that idea at 1.52 ( I have to check it again) into a song. Thanks for your advice I agree with you %100.

[paradigm001]

Yea state of bass that synth sound had the strongest sub, it was a massive patch I believe, I did little manipulation, just cleaned it up a little. I actually wanted to add indian strings rising and falling during that part. I always thought of that part as a different song too I just have too many ideas.