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RIICH - One Small Step (Moonstep/Brostep)

Post by Riich » Wed Sep 21, 2011 12:31 am

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Hey guys, just wondering if anyone could give me any pointers/comments on my sound design and overall feel in this track, especially the drop.

Just a warning, I didn't add really add subbass or effects to the drop and the track isn't mastered at all so its pretty rough.

To anyone that's reading this, thanks for your time and if you want me to comment or critique any of your tracks just post them below and i'll be sure to tell you my honest opinion.

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Re: RIICH - One Small Step (Moonstep/Brostep)

Post by Monstro » Wed Sep 21, 2011 12:35 am

Not bad really, the intro has an interesting flow and the drop is mostly solid, but there is a little mud on one of the synths that could be notched out a little.

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Re: RIICH - One Small Step (Moonstep/Brostep)

Post by Riich » Wed Sep 21, 2011 12:59 am

thanks for the feedback man i really appreciate it!
what part has mud? just like how many seconds in or whatever. i posted in your thread and gave you a download on soundcloud btw :D
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Re: RIICH - One Small Step (Moonstep/Brostep)

Post by ChEEzin » Wed Sep 21, 2011 1:38 am

It's not that rough man! I love the intro, and that drop is dirty. You have any idea when your going to add subbass and some effects to it?

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Re: RIICH - One Small Step (Moonstep/Brostep)

Post by Monstro » Wed Sep 21, 2011 1:39 am

I think its like 1:04
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Re: RIICH - One Small Step (Moonstep/Brostep)

Post by Riich » Wed Sep 21, 2011 1:46 am

@ChEEzin thanks bro <3 it means alot, idk if ill even get to it this week/weekend, i got tests this whole week and then going to see bassnectar this weekend... SO PUMPED

@Monstro oh okay i know exactly what you mean now, ill definitely fix that with some reverb and some eqing. thanks for the feedback
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Re: RIICH - One Small Step (Moonstep/Brostep)

Post by ChEEzin » Wed Sep 21, 2011 1:49 am

haha right on, lucky you xD

I'll be sure to follow you on soundcloud, looking forward to the full mastered out version!

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Re: RIICH - One Small Step (Moonstep/Brostep)

Post by Riich » Wed Sep 21, 2011 2:31 am

thanks man, if you got any friends that like dubstep or whatever could you show them it? i'm just tryna get as much input as possible
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Re: RIICH - One Small Step (Moonstep/Brostep)

Post by ChEEzin » Wed Sep 21, 2011 2:33 am

yeah, i'll send it to all of them and tell them to check it out man

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Re: RIICH - One Small Step (Moonstep/Brostep)

Post by Riich » Wed Sep 21, 2011 10:47 am

bumpp. any feedback is appreciated
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Re: RIICH - One Small Step (Moonstep/Brostep)

Post by daeMTHAFKNkim » Wed Sep 21, 2011 12:17 pm

I love the whole entire dubstep part. Sounds reallyyy good. I only don't like the intro part but that's only my opinion. I think you should cut it in half. Or this song would be good for the 1st song on your album if you are planning to make one. :P But yeah I get what you mean by the upbeat part from my song to yours. Sick !
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Re: RIICH - One Small Step (Moonstep/Brostep)

Post by Riich » Wed Sep 21, 2011 11:35 pm

haha thanks man. I know ill eventually release an ep but probably not anytime soon unless its gonna be a small dubstep one. I kinda wanna do something like porter robinson's new spitfire ep where its a mix of genres.
on the feedback okay i kinda see what you mean, ill definitely take that into consideration. but do you mean cut out the very beginning part where the drums fade in or when he's speaking? or
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Re: RIICH - One Small Step (Moonstep/Brostep)

Post by Deaph » Thu Sep 22, 2011 3:28 am

Diggin all the bass cutz for sure. Keeps chuggin along. i really like the drop. also a big fan when it drops 4/4 the only thing i would say is make the transition into the 4/4 more poignant some silence or the mankind sample. would melt faces.
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Re: RIICH - One Small Step (Moonstep/Brostep)

Post by Riich » Thu Sep 22, 2011 3:54 am

@deaph thanks for the feedback man! yeah i was definitely thinking about doing that with the mankind sample but i never thought of the silence, that might just do the trick, but i'll probably try some cutouts with some arpeggio's as well, make it a bit friendlier to people who like more melodic dubstep and such...
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