Triphosphate - Fidgetstep (fidget+dubstep)

[Triphosphate]

Hi! Been lurking for a couple of days on the production threads and decided to throw a track up here for feedback as my first post.

It's an unusual song starting with a fidget/electro vibe that morphs into dubstep. I'm particularly concerned that the genre transition doesn't gel. I would be very appreciative of any feedback or advice offered. I'm so happy that I've stumbled on this forum. Thanks!

http://www.soundcloud.com/triphosphate/fidgetstep

[hostain]

its really good man, really clear :0 think you should maybe turn up the volume up abit on the more dubsteppy part at the end of it, seems really quiet comin out my speakers compared to the rest of it & the transition between the 2 parts is great! you pulled it off well but when it goes into the dubsteppy part its like its a completely different tune. i like it but think you should maybe make it into 2 different tunes, one electro & one dubstep. really like that hip hop tune youve done aswell!!!

[Triphosphate]

Huge thanks for checking out hiphop! That song is my pride and joy right now.

As for this song I was kinda afraid that it just sounds like 2 songs, I might try to place something melodic that plays through both parts to see if that helps. I might push the drop up a db or 2 also! Thanks so much for the feedback!

[Droptek]

Nice vibe man! 2 very nice sections going on. It's just the transitions that let this down. Also try layering your snares for a phatter sound!
I'd really like to remix this, any chance you could send me some stems?

[Triphosphate]

Thanks for the input Droptek, of course you can remix it! I'll bounce out the stems for you when I get home from work tonight. Do you have a dropbox? PM me, we'll make arrangements.

[DCSILIKADOODI]

Nice. I like the ending haha. Im not to fond of the beginning only because it sound like a deeper dirty dutch house sound. But thats only because I've heard a ton of it. Nice job man.

[Triphosphate]

Really appreciative of the feedback. Thanks very much! I'm gonna have to check out some dutch house tonight, can't say I'm familiar with that style.

[AirRake]

deepest square wave ive ever heard lol i like this alot, rediculously clean too btw nice work!

drums were a little bland to me at some parts but i think all together its really well done.

[Triphosphate]

deepest square wave ive ever heard lol i like this alot, rediculously clean too btw nice work!

drums were a little bland to me at some parts but i think all together its really well done.

I'm honored lol. Yeah, I really should have layered some of my drums there, I did it in one sitting which is a big no-no in my opinion. I think this one is gonna need a VIP . Thanks a ton for your opinion man, I've gotta try something like those rich minor melodies you made. So sick.

[SlumCity]

soundcloud is down right now or something , ill check back later!

[Triphosphate]

Is it still? Gosh. It's times like these that make me want to YouTube my songs

[SlumCity]

feeling the half time drop when it finally got there... didnt like the house part much , also it i think it needs an identity of some sort, a much stronger lead sound or a sample or a vocal or something.

[Bonz]

mad intro!! BIG DROP.
im diggin this tune man. big ups!