Rostik - One Day (Golden Boy Experimental Remix)

[Riich]

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Just me experimenting with all these sounds I just started making this afternoon. I should probably be doing things more productive but fuck it.

Can you guys tell me what you think? Even if you think its bad or it sucks, please tell me why it sucks so I can fix it.

Any feedback is appreciated guys, thanks for reading this!

[Cubicle]

Drums sound pretty crisp mate.
Love the intro pad. Self-made or is it a preset? Would go sweet with some minimal Burial/Phaeleh beats.

Synths sound wide enough tho. Nice work on the vocal aswell.

Get something finished mate!

[Riich]

haha i'll finish it. I just don't want to release anything that isn't perfect. anyway. thanks for the feedback man, its appreciated!

[Khazm]

Maybe add some very backgroundish notes during the intro? It seems quite slow moving with just a washy noise, again that's just me. I quite like the vocals, nice reverb.

[zillion]

Yer needs some nice really delayed notes at the intro just to fill it out a bit more.....

Nice idea though but i do think it takes a little while to get moving but i can hear what your your going for....

Just needs more sounds on the build up so its has a bit of bigger drop....

The vocals are tasty work really well with the whole would love to know what acapella you have used or did u records
these yourself??

Bass needs to have more impact imo aswell

Really nice idea for sure though...

Just needs a bit of tinkering to fill it out a bit more..

[Riich]

regarding the vocals its a remix for Rostik's song One Day so they are his vocals haha.
and i lost my aux cord so i didn't add any subbass on the drop (i wouldn't be able to hear it),
i just added some drums, white noise and fx to the beginning to give it more umpf, thanks for the advice,
i also used a random vocal sample before the drop (some guy saying whatchuuu gone doo)

[paradigm001]

I really like the arp chord structure and the shuffle you give it,I dont really hear what high sound your talking about, but thanks for that input, something is muddying them up, it might be the verb on the synths : solid tune though love to hear it all the way through!

[JLA]

Ha, I loved it!

It was just so many different things in one thing XD I definitely couldn't call it 'concise', but that isn't bad at all!

From rain to crazy wubs, baller.

[Riich]

Ha, I loved it!

It was just so many different things in one thing XD I definitely couldn't call it 'concise', but that isn't bad at all!

From rain to crazy wubs, baller.

thanks for the feedback everybody! and @paradigm thanks mate, that means i'll probably keep it.

also thanks for the ideas, Its already changed so much I might post an updated version tomorrow or later this weekend, if I finish it is anyone up too promote?

[Mastem]

This has a nice feel to it, it's chill but it still has filthy ass wobble, good work mate

[ReachZenith]

Solid work imo. I wanna hear the finished product, I'll be waiting haha

[mikestone]

I like it alot finish it up! I think it would be dope to bring in the rain at the beginning into the song somehow later.

[mimosa]

this is good. the intro is too long but thats okay. i like the melody but it could be a little more dissonant. clean. When it drops i really feel it. try not to get too lumped into the "dubstep" role. Experiment freely. 8/10

[mAson2k9]

im liking the intro alot, i think the rest needs work, but its definately a start!

[Arnolfini]

im liking the sounds you have going on, just needs a bit more structure, the end drop is sick though, gonna keep an eye out for when this is finished

[Riich]

thanks everyone! i'll be sure to pm the people who wanna hear the finished product when I'm done

@mikestone about the beginning, yeah i was thinking the same thing, for a club version or whatever i'll probably take most of that out but for this, its just kinda to build atmosphere and feel in the track
@mimosa thanks for your honest opinion man, can you give me any examples of what you mean about the intro? i think i know but i'm not sure. and as regards to the drop, its already changed a bit so you might like it better.

@arnolfini regarding struture i know what you mean. after classes today i'm just gonna focus on the build up and i'm gonna make it long unexpected and sick, (i'm thinking knife party type of build up)

again thanks for the feedback everyone!

if you have any other ideas just let me know and i'll definitely try to implement them the best I can.

[nomold]

That is a loooong intro. Would probably try to shorten that a bit....doesn't really need the rain bit at the begining. Really enjoying the drop on this one. One criticism is that it could stand to have a little more subbass on the drop. Overall, really good stuff- will be excited to hear the finished bit.

If you get a chance, would love to hear what you think about my track as well: http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=225213

[Riich]

yeah i'm probably gonna shorten the intro a bit, I haven't added subbass cause i lost my aux cord that plugs into my speakers and i made this tune using headphones. i might just head over my mate's house today so i can use his system to finish it.

i'll be sure to pm you when its finished man, thanks!

i left a comment on your thread (i fucking love the walking dead haha)

[Bad Attitude]

Can't add to much to whats been said, but it's pretty nice work man. Can add us to the list, love to hear the finished article.