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Jackknife
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by Jackknife » Mon Nov 21, 2011 8:20 pm
Another track I was working on prior to the collapse of civilization, I mean my computer, finished it up yesterday, still considering it a work in progress, all feedback is greatly appreciated and of course feedback for feedback!
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pixelscum
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by pixelscum » Mon Nov 21, 2011 9:14 pm
The melodies and drum patterns all work very well! I'd just work on perfecting the individual sounds.
Some sound a bit thin, try layering them some more. Maybe add a couple of subtle distortions, some verbs and other fx to the synths.
Maybe change the snare, it sounds quity hissy. I'd love to hear a little more punch.
Good job though, I like the style and there's nothing wrong with the composition, just the individual sounds need some work.
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Jackknife
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by Jackknife » Mon Nov 21, 2011 9:23 pm
Dope thank you very much for the feedback

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paradigm001
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by paradigm001 » Mon Nov 21, 2011 9:25 pm
your synths sound good their just not even in the beginning, maybee if you ran them all through a compressor that would even them out, thats what I had to do. Keep the sub on a different channel. A couple sounds stick out but thats allright, your gettin the hang of it. Keep it up!
...wanna collab? Im down for new sounds, send me a PM please.
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Jackknife
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by Jackknife » Mon Nov 21, 2011 9:31 pm
Oh yeah that's cause I had a volume control automation making them louder, it was originally a 16 bar intro thanks for poiting it out i'll take it out

Thanks for the feedback man, I really appreciate it :]
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Hysterikz
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by Hysterikz » Tue Dec 20, 2011 4:19 am
Wow, I love your bass synth, however it could use a little more sub imo, though that sound might have been what you were going for. Although I do think that you should maybe put in another synth in the background or maybe add in some FX, it just sounded a little dry. I still love it, and atleast it's just a WIP, you can still improve it!
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paradigm001
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by paradigm001 » Tue Dec 20, 2011 6:51 am
Like your bass synth. You need more of that.
...wanna collab? Im down for new sounds, send me a PM please.
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