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Kpin
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KPIN- BOTCHED PLANS

Post by Kpin » Sat Jan 07, 2012 11:43 pm

Super chill track I came up with....

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grooki
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Re: KPIN- BOTCHED PLANS

Post by grooki » Sun Jan 08, 2012 1:24 am

I really like this, I love the snare rim-shot sample, and the staggering drums are really good. The 90s sounding dance chords are also sweet, as are all the melodies. I think the sub notes are really nice too. I thought that a few more held notes of the sub would sound really nice, but that's just taste really. Great job :W:

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Re: KPIN- BOTCHED PLANS

Post by vyvyan » Sun Jan 08, 2012 6:28 pm

Hi,

Really nice work, very smooth and well produced!
I quite agree with Grooki, I think something like more subs on empty places would add more dub/deep atmosphere.

Thanks for sharing!

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Re: KPIN- BOTCHED PLANS

Post by Kewlio » Tue Jan 10, 2012 9:51 am

Sounds real sexy this one. Two small things that i thought of was, first the first kick @0:00. Don't know whether or not i like it to be there. I think it might give a weird start, of cause I haven't heard without the kick.

The second thing is at the end. Don't cut is that early, I want to hear the rest of the echo on that last vocal chord. Just give it 3-4 sec more.

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Re: KPIN- BOTCHED PLANS

Post by Sparxy » Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:14 pm

Oooo pleasantly surprised. Really liking it mate.
I like the verbed and delayed piano keys, gives it a real balearic feel but not too cheesy. Reminding me of the summer. Production is on point, mixdown is good and it progresses really well

Can you send me a 320 bro? i would spin this!

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Re: KPIN- BOTCHED PLANS

Post by Kpin » Tue Jan 10, 2012 5:28 pm

Thanks for the kind words guys... glad you enjoyed it... yeah I agree probably needs more sub, guess i got lazy on that part haha..

I uploaded it as a 320 sparxy so its available right there on my soundcloud, same for my other tracks... :P

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Re: KPIN- BOTCHED PLANS

Post by The Jaft » Fri Jan 20, 2012 1:33 am

hey, sorry it took me soooo long to get back to you. in the middle of listening to your track my computer gave me the blue screen of death, and i lost eve.r.y.thing... i found a temporary computer to use in the mean time. mind you i dont have my monitors hooked up to this one, so im somewhat limited in my range of feedback.

well here it is...

super chill is an understatement haha. i could put this on repeat and find myself drift to sleep, which to me is a good thing being that im an insomniac. very relaxing with just enough tension in your chords and stabs to keep it from fading too far into the background. your percussion work is spot on. nothing sticks out, yet it's still present enough to add a nice feel and drive to the tune. i agree on the topic of your sub from what i can hear. i think it would sound more finished with a little more sub here and there, but that's just opinion i guess :)

overall, very very well produced. super clean nothing sounded like it was fighting with anything else in the tune.
imma follow you on sound cloud, can't wait to hear what else you have in store!
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