Yesdog - Spring Seasonal (Drumstep Waltz, WIP)

colinrgodsey · Post by **colinrgodsey** » Tue Apr 24, 2012 11:46 pm

A work in progress, all original (minus the CTA sample). Still needs some filler in parts.

Accepting all input! Really desperate for feedback

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rainbo · Post by **rainbo** » Wed Apr 25, 2012 6:19 am

an interesting track my friend// not bad for an early attempt// keep doin what your doin and you'll be killing it in no time!///////////

Electric_Head · Post by **Electric_Head** » Wed Apr 25, 2012 11:55 am

You need to work on your eqing.
There are loads of clashing frequencies.
I am also noting a fair amount of distortion I`m assuming on the kick bass 130-148 you can hear it best.
Or it`s some serious phase issues.
I`d add some nice shuffly hats to give it some swing and change up the kick snare pattern occasionally.

Keep at it, you have some interesting ideas for sure.

colinrgodsey · Post by **colinrgodsey** » Wed Apr 25, 2012 1:34 pm

rainbo wrote:an interesting track my friend// not bad for an early attempt// keep doin what your doin and you'll be killing it in no time!///////////

thanks!! hopefully I can flush it out into something a little more palatable

Electric_Head wrote:You need to work on your eqing.
There are loads of clashing frequencies.
I am also noting a fair amount of distortion I`m assuming on the kick bass 130-148 you can hear it best.
Or it`s some serious phase issues.
I`d add some nice shuffly hats to give it some swing and change up the kick snare pattern occasionally.

Keep at it, you have some interesting ideas for sure.

Thanks again! Really awesome that you commented on both my tracks. Did you notice most of the clashing in the high-end? I think some of those leads clash. There's also a weird 'pulsing' that develops around 0:40 that im... confused about. The kick does suffer from some phase issues (having trouble layering kicks) and clips with a crappy limiter. I need to just layer the drums better =\ I keep relying on dynamics control when it just sounds crappy

The drums do need a lot more character, still trying to figure out something that works well in 3/4. Hopefully ill have an update soonish.

Thanks again to both of you! Very much appreciated.

WastelanDUB · Post by **WastelanDUB** » Thu Apr 26, 2012 10:25 am

Very trancy, Sounds pretty good man

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