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dubmac
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Post by dubmac » Thu May 21, 2009 5:18 pm

A loop from my track!feedback needed:D

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?wmme3yi4efz :

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lurking and listening

Post by mrwould » Fri May 22, 2009 2:49 am

there's some good stuff here. been lurking around and listening to a few. i love the passion everyone has and the fact that people are open to criticism.
keep up the good production. i'll listen.
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mrwould
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Post by mrwould » Fri May 22, 2009 2:58 am

germskiller wrote:http://soundcloud.com/g-main

Need feedback on these two tracks. Both need mastering and deeper bass :lol:


Gwan.
really enjoyed White Wash. thank you

diaryofanobody
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Post by diaryofanobody » Fri May 22, 2009 11:56 am

@Gussie Tea

is that you ramoteph
i really love those oldstyle rave synths @ 03.43

i dont want to add a wobble
it wont fit the track
i stay with my plain sine / tri bass

thanks for your feedback

stux
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Post by stux » Sat May 23, 2009 6:14 pm

This is my first try at a proper dubstep track, dunno if its any good really, ive been fighting with the snare and cant decide how loud it should be any more and its missing little touches like some noises or samples from the intro sample. Also the intro is terrible.

This isnt the whole track obviously this goes to just before the bit before the second drop whatever its called. Any feedback would be awesome.

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stappard
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Post by stappard » Sat May 23, 2009 6:24 pm

stux wrote:This is my first try at a proper dubstep track, dunno if its any good really, ive been fighting with the snare and cant decide how loud it should be any more and its missing little touches like some noises or samples from the intro sample. Also the intro is terrible.

This isnt the whole track obviously this goes to just before the bit before the second drop whatever its called. Any feedback would be awesome.

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I'd say the intro goes on a bit too long but once it gets going theres a nice flow to the bass.

soner one
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Post by soner one » Sat May 23, 2009 10:16 pm

Could do with some feedback

the tune needs a fresh mix down and a few blips to cover the bass sounds abit empty

track called juice youtube quality for the moment

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=REkFT5_iec8

any advice and opinions welcome

soner one
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Post by soner one » Sat May 23, 2009 10:20 pm

A loop from my track!feedback needed:D

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?wmme3yi4efz :
Sounds nice mate well dark indeed

soner one
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Post by soner one » Sat May 23, 2009 10:23 pm

Sup dudes
New here - firsty contribution...
thought itd be best to show you what im working on (been workin on) RAAAH!

My first stabs at dubstep came from dabbling in DnB with a mate, in order to learn how to make my own synth noises (using Zeta) - wows, yois, womps, etc... then I heard some dubstep and thought it suited my previous attempts at getting into prog breaks and IDM.

Anyhoo, got these two nuggets in the gold mine:
Bob The Aunty [ no presets or premade shizzle (apart from intro loop by Bonobo ) - not strictly dubstep, but its not far off ) ]
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... ID=7617111

Bass sounds big on this one

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_boring
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Post by _boring » Mon May 25, 2009 7:21 am

new one, go to hell

http://virb.com/stuntman
SOUNDCLOUD.COM/STUNTMANSTEP
SOUNDCLOUD.COM/STUNTMAN-2
SOUNDCLOUD.COM/STUNTMAN-3
WAXMUSEUMRADIO.NET
MNM PRESENTS/QUEEN CITY CARTEL
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ldjiv
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Post by ldjiv » Mon May 25, 2009 4:56 pm

well this is my first post
gotta start somewhere i guess
here's a little something i started today:


http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=acf4 ... f6e8ebb871


big up yourself

knobgoblin
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Post by knobgoblin » Mon May 25, 2009 11:38 pm

@fuzz2k: Robocop is sounding dank. I love the bitcrushed bass, sounds reallly smooth and gritty all at once. Drums and mixdown are good too, but I dont really like the wave table sweep/glitch melody, it sounds a little raw and out of place to me. Maybe it just needs some more atmosphere around it or some more filtering? BMore is sounding great too, BTW.

@ViralCode: I really like the celest melody, and the low end of the kick negates the need for a bass in the intro. Cant wait to hear what it develops into.

Heres a little something I'm working on right now. A mix of Gamelan and dub sounds:
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/518773/Gamel ... 20test.mp3

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Post by _boring » Wed May 27, 2009 12:40 am

made this when i was black out drunk

http://virb.com/stuntman

Failboat


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funny to wake up to that in the morning
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SOUNDCLOUD.COM/STUNTMAN-2
SOUNDCLOUD.COM/STUNTMAN-3
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[binge]
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Post by [binge] » Wed May 27, 2009 9:17 am

http://www.beatportal.com/remix/detail/ ... pretation/ ------ right, i entered into a depeche mode remix contest (as im sure countless others have), to progress through the contest, it comes down to public vote and votes by those who run the contest. so the more public votes or 'spins' i can get. the better, thanks in advanced!

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aggle ale
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Post by aggle ale » Wed May 27, 2009 5:59 pm

I DO CRIME

just a snippet of an unfinished track, feedback appreciated


http://www.myspace.com/aggledsounds

stux
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Post by stux » Wed May 27, 2009 6:22 pm

track i started today, bit dirty

http://www.tindeck.com/listen/ksad

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Post by fuzz_2k » Fri May 29, 2009 12:07 am

KnobGoblin wrote:Heres a little something I'm working on right now. A mix of Gamelan and dub sounds:
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/518773/Gamel ... 20test.mp3
think the overall sound is real nice!! reminds me of tunng without the vocals, love the way the hihats roll :twisted:
static_cast wrote:STOP MESSING WITH THE KICK DRUM AND MAKE SOME MUSIC
http://soundcloud.com/fuzz2k
Soundcloud
OtherbrotherRecordings
Gradient Audio
AlterkationRecordings
GammaAudio

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lowpass
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Post by lowpass » Fri May 29, 2009 8:19 am

stux wrote:track i started today, bit dirty

http://www.tindeck.com/listen/ksad
The intro is sounding dark I like it, Think drums could be louder in the intro, snare sounded a little dull in it, the bassline I like has enough switches to keep it interesting.

This is my attempt below, let me know your thoughts on it

http://www.zshare.net/audio/60665087bc2a1bfb/

resktwo
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Post by resktwo » Sun May 31, 2009 11:32 am

Lowpass wrote:
stux wrote:track i started today, bit dirty

http://www.tindeck.com/listen/ksad
The intro is sounding dark I like it, Think drums could be louder in the intro, snare sounded a little dull in it, the bassline I like has enough switches to keep it interesting.

This is my attempt below, let me know your thoughts on it

http://www.zshare.net/audio/60665087bc2a1bfb/
i like it, ambient, very cool.


ok this one is a little fucked up its this thing ive been working on for the last couple of hours and im not sure if its good or really really bad

anyway, please feedback :)

http://www.zshare.net/audio/60755066d2a21baa/

lolwut
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Post by lolwut » Sun May 31, 2009 7:30 pm

Was playing with some glitchy effects and patterns using some dub/regg samples.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/60770686b5991e0f/

Far from a beat, but I'm digging the glitch sound.

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