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contakt321 · Post by **contakt321** » Wed May 27, 2009 8:39 pm

rook wrote:Hey there! I've been sitting on a remix of that David After Dentist youtube video. (original video @ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=txqiwrbYGrs)

It's mostly done, but there are a couple mistakes and in huge need of polishing/a proper mixdown.

I would absolutely love any critiques people have to give as I'm still relatively clueless when it comes to good mixing/eqing/compression.

The ending section is slightly out of pitch and looses some energy, so I may be redoing that, iduno.

Thanks in advance!

http://soundcloud.com/rook/dentist-trip

I don't know if I have any useful comments other than that I would fall out laughing and love this if I heard this drunk at a club. Nice one!

rook · Post by **rook** » Wed May 27, 2009 9:11 pm

contakt321 wrote:
rook wrote:Hey there! I've been sitting on a remix of that David After Dentist youtube video. (original video @ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=txqiwrbYGrs)

It's mostly done, but there are a couple mistakes and in huge need of polishing/a proper mixdown.

I would absolutely love any critiques people have to give as I'm still relatively clueless when it comes to good mixing/eqing/compression.

The ending section is slightly out of pitch and looses some energy, so I may be redoing that, iduno.

Thanks in advance!

http://soundcloud.com/rook/dentist-trip

I don't know if I have any useful comments other than that I would fall out laughing and love this if I heard this drunk at a club. Nice one!

haha! thanks man :]

deepend · Post by **deepend** » Wed May 27, 2009 11:19 pm

new track, BLUE STRIPES, on the player

http://www.myspace.com/deependstepmusic

naus · Post by **naus** » Thu May 28, 2009 12:55 pm

Megaladon wrote:@ Naus- Enjoyed both of those, they sound like actual songs rather than the 'bits and bobs' I put together. Very chilled- can't say more on the production to be honest, I like it like this.

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Nice one bro! thanks for the feedback.

paravrais

Thanks to you also for the feedback il be sure to look out for your bits.

Back to the lab!

naus · Post by **naus** » Thu May 28, 2009 7:29 pm

paravrais wrote:And lo I have returned!

My 2 DnB tunes at the top of my player are much better than my dubstep but this is dubstepforum so I guess I should ask for feedback on "highness" and "cat" my two latest ventures into dubstep. (Posted Cat on here a while ago but its undergone a few changes since then.) Tunes are on my myspace here - http://www.myspace.com/sativabreather

My eyes are hurting so im gonna get off the comp but I might drop more feedback later if I get some!

Cat - Nice idea man. some of the synth sounds sound as if they could do with a bit of beef imo.
The bassline/synth is pretty cool! tbh on the second drop i was expecting some big snares would sound good i rekon. nice

Highness - Again nice intro and melodies. Think the beats need alot of beefing up though imo layering more snares and kicks n ting.

naus · Post by **naus** » Thu May 28, 2009 7:34 pm

SW@T wrote:Heh.. repost!
Sorry guys

I am still pretty fucking new to production and need some pointers...HELP!

Got a couple tracks up on http://www.myspace.com/djswat

If your bored or just like stating your opinion, feel free to go nuts!

Thanks in advance Smile

D

P.S.
Tracks:
The Rumble, Rehab, 6 Million, Basscase < not really dubstep. But all the rest are. They are all very different from each other.

My fav is 6 million...nice beats and atmospheric sounds! some low subby bass would sound nice here and there i rekon love the track though dark n moody.

5-0-what · Post by **5-0-what** » Fri May 29, 2009 5:51 am

contakt321 wrote:
rook wrote:Hey there! I've been sitting on a remix of that David After Dentist youtube video. (original video @ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=txqiwrbYGrs)

It's mostly done, but there are a couple mistakes and in huge need of polishing/a proper mixdown.

I would absolutely love any critiques people have to give as I'm still relatively clueless when it comes to good mixing/eqing/compression.

The ending section is slightly out of pitch and looses some energy, so I may be redoing that, iduno.

Thanks in advance!

http://soundcloud.com/rook/dentist-trip
I don't know if I have any useful comments other than that I would fall out laughing and love this if I heard this drunk at a club. Nice one!

i would start by saying i love the tune but the bass in the first drop is really smashin the drums to death i love the vocal sample and the drum programming at like 3:00 is redonkulis fucking crazy and now again at 4:00 this track never stops evolving i would love to here the final product banging on some loud system

rook · Post by **rook** » Fri May 29, 2009 7:37 pm

five-ohh-what wrote:
contakt321 wrote:
rook wrote:Hey there! I've been sitting on a remix of that David After Dentist youtube video. (original video @ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=txqiwrbYGrs)

http://soundcloud.com/rook/dentist-trip
I don't know if I have any useful comments other than that I would fall out laughing and love this if I heard this drunk at a club. Nice one!
i would start by saying i love the tune but the bass in the first drop is really smashin the drums to death i love the vocal sample and the drum programming at like 3:00 is redonkulis fucking crazy and now again at 4:00 this track never stops evolving i would love to here the final product banging on some loud system

Thanks! I'll definitely try and clean up the bass/drums.

wrexile · Post by **wrexile** » Fri May 29, 2009 10:21 pm

New one called "Rose Bed"

kujikuru · Post by **kujikuru** » Fri May 29, 2009 11:09 pm

i like that beat.....can't be a critique 'cos i'm a newbie but its ambient. wat software u using if u dnt mind me askin?

melodik · Post by **melodik** » Sat May 30, 2009 12:12 pm

http://soundcloud.com/melodik/business-1

new ting....keen to know what all the heads be thinking, crit would be madly appreciated

onetime!

deadly_habit · Post by **deadly_habit** » Sun May 31, 2009 4:38 am

http://www13.zippyshare.com/v/94262186/file.html

close to completion, choppage/drumfunk dnb number so semi out of context for this board.

naus · Post by **naus** » Sun May 31, 2009 12:29 pm

Deadly Habit wrote:http://www13.zippyshare.com/v/94262186/file.html

close to completion, choppage/drumfunk dnb number so semi out of context for this board.

hey,

love this. The drum edits are really nice, as is the subtle bass and atmos. Very metalheadzy lol

maybe some pitch changes in the drums at points would and a little more variation if you think thats needed... im not sure!

good work!

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Sun May 31, 2009 1:17 pm

http://vandalism.20twelvedubstep.com/al ... -e-p-tt016

Thought i'd just put it here so more people download it hehe..

higgzbozon · Post by **higgzbozon** » Sun May 31, 2009 6:15 pm

We have a new 320 up for download, would be nice to recieve some feedback! (also play it everywhere you like

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Higgz Bozon & Walter Ego - Badman Pull Up

P.s. Soundcloud seems to somehow add a wierd low noise to the tune, the download version is okay though... (any tips on this?)