The Bro - Murda Weapon - Another tune I'm working on innit

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This is another tune I'm working on at the mo. Its not finished yet but erm yeah did this one about 1.5 months ago. Kinda ran dry on what to do next. Hope to come back to it and finish it. Anyways views appreciated. Prolly one of my better dubstep tunes I reckons!

All comments welcome and I will reciprocate and comment on your tunes.

https://www.yousendit.com/download/Q01F ... Z252Wmc9PQ

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Yo yo bumples in effect. Happy to swap comments peeps. Let us know your deepest thoughts on my tunes.

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Anyone?

[grifta]

Hey, just listened

Its quite original for what it is. There are a lot of influences going on. I would say though as dubstep this really doesn't work for me. I can imagine this with some grime mc going crazy but not to skank to. I suggest going back to basics. Load up a kick, snare and sub bass with the attack and release slowed a bit and try and come up with something much more simple. And i suggest half time as well

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Hey, just listened

Its quite original for what it is. There are a lot of influences going on. I would say though as dubstep this really doesn't work for me. I can imagine this with some grime mc going crazy but not to skank to. I suggest going back to basics. Load up a kick, snare and sub bass with the attack and release slowed a bit and try and come up with something much more simple. And i suggest half time as well

With fresh ears I can definitely see what you mean but it was written in half time lol. I think the percussion prolly gives it more of a house/garage vibe although it was intended that way. I kinda almost knicked the bassline from an Reload tune which is totally bad ass!!