New dubstep tune give me a listen and I'll do the same for u

chitownrolla · Post by **chitownrolla** » Sun Jan 18, 2009 3:27 am

Just found out about this forum, been on DOA for a while. Looking for any advice I can get on my track "Sleepwalker". Just a 2 min clip, but its the jist of the tune.

Davey P

chitownrolla · Post by **chitownrolla** » Sun Jan 18, 2009 3:28 am

http://www.myspace.com/davepetrin

there's the link

chitownrolla · Post by **chitownrolla** » Sun Jan 18, 2009 5:47 pm

good point on the drums, I def notice it now that you mention it. That's my first thing to do when I clean it up. Appreciate the listen.

jbird22 · Post by **jbird22** » Sun Jan 18, 2009 5:52 pm

Real nice synth work mate an I like the overall feel 2 the track.

As said previously, needs some more bass.

mista nyce · Post by **mista nyce** » Mon Jan 19, 2009 11:12 pm

hey this is pretty nice overall i would like a lil more change ups in the melody and maybe layer ur snare with one or 2 more just to give it a lil more emphasis. just my opinion hope it helped.
keep it up tho

New dubstep tune give me a listen and I'll do the same for u

New dubstep tune give me a listen and I'll do the same for u

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