It's all about EQ-ing and compression, my friend

Since I'm new, I'm probably not the best to give specific advice.

So, I'm completely new to this genre. Started listening and producing dirty dubstep a couple of weeks ago. Heres a snippet from a remix of Bring Me The Horizon that I am working on. Don't know if I'm gonna take away the vocals and make my own track. What do you think? Keep in mind this is my first p...