my post also disappeared
i left soundcloud comments yesterday, and will do so for anyone that i missed that hooks it up

It's been a minute since my last post, ...think i've become a bit better since lol
...was interested in what people think of the track in my sig

@ jayzest, love that melody-nice and catchy-flows well. sub is almost non-existent though. @ bluenotes, that is so chill man, nice first post :) This is just me I think, but I don't really feel like those particular vocal samples fit that vibe quite right- they seem too energetic maybe? @ mattyseizu...

@ Bradicle, that made a nice difference.
@ mmjdw, while I appreciate the advice, there's no need to deride my intelligence with (big word).

@ Bradicle Nice and smooth track you got going on. Nice ambience, nice instrument choices. The bass does overpower a bit and causes some distortion among the rest of the track. Just that little tweak and you've got a fine liquid track

@ Snoopexx, For being in its early stages, those are some wonderful sounds you got going on. It definitely is missin a hook though-somethin to keep you curious about what's next, you know. I'm just imagining some chainsaw weilding psycho coming out of the shadows to lop off your punkin sounds :twist...

@ Mouldy Soul, Thanks for the heads up :) I'm diggin your track. It's got a nice vibe to it. The beginning quarter works well, however it seems to get a little bit repetitive during the 2nd quarter. I 'm feeling like this comes from the rhythmic effects. Even though they add interesting feel to the ...

Hello all. I'm new here, plz excuse my poor etiquette until I am better accustomed to the way things are done. I would like to get some feedback for this track, if anyone has the time plz.