ya haha my b, im actually not used to the whole forum bit, and i was just too excited i finished it (kinda :P ) and had to see what others thought, but ya it was my first attempt at making music so i was stoked =D. I see what your sayin with the generic sounding wobble, and the pretty bland ...

http://soundcloud.com/phyck/ancient-wobbles-2

give me some input thx =D