you need to add some more transitions cause this gets a bit samesy after a while.
the concept your going for is neat though

mmm nice and RESINY. (resonatey) sonorous bassline. spectacular producer. A GOOD COMBINATION.
maybe take down the mids just an eency little bit though
EDIT: nevermind it was just my speaker being a little shit. Mix is A-OK

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oh hi i made this with my computer believe it or not. you can do that now

mmm nice lush acoustic instrumentation. The bassline made a little queasy (but in a good way!) I like the subtle builds. How is albino compared to massive? I'm considering buying one of 'em.

Me and bud just finished our first track.
We were mostly looking for some some helpful criticism since its far from perfect but we can't pinpoint exactly what we did wrong.

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