thnx

dance music cant be intelligent? the drums obviously need to be easily mixd but the rest of the music shouldnt be constrained by minimalistic ideas. haha you and i must go to very different clubs cus most of the tunes i hear are filthy and very hard hitting. damn near melts your skin off. of course ...

that had to be one of the most boring drawn out pieces ive ever heard. its repetitive and honestly doesnt progress at all. i most certainly would not call it a masterpiece. although i do agree that the highs on my piece are a bit much. im used to orchestrated music where layers and harmony are consi...

definitely what you really think but with embellishments that make for a good critique. if you would be so inclined

i mean if you have a lot of experience id love for you to have a go at my pieces. ive been makin electronic music for like 6 years or so but im fairly new to dubstep. http://soundcloud.com/hypnos1

@jargs still i think you could start with words. also im not tryin to be antagonistic i was merely attempting to understand why one would choose to jump straight to scrapping a project as opposed to refining it

^ I'm not gonna lie to people and tell them their beats are good when they are clearly not. Your friends will lie to you and tell you your shit is good to make you happy. That kind of shit does not lead to musical improvement. but if you have experience i think that you might want to give pointers....

jargs wrote:scrap it mate

do you ever have anything positive to say?

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mostly finished. definitely not a WIP any more. feed back critique etcetc

allhellno wrote:Needs more filth!! :]

i cant not agree with that

jargs wrote:I'm gonna tell the truth and say, needs a shit load of work.

that's a bit ambiguous. mostly for my sake what aspects of this piece did you believe needed enhancing?

didnt skimp on the sub. good man

i like the intro. but i think the center piece of this track is the rhythmic almost tidal feeling that the bass conjures up. the cocaine sample seems out of place though. def a badass piece

i luz this track. unfortunately my nao rose tinted raver goggles make it impossible for me to critique it :/
but i spose thats a good thing

DigitsUK wrote:p.s any chance you can check out my song, freshly made today, interested in your thoughts on it D: (its my sig)

i had already opened it in a new window when i read that lol

@mrtommyjay i definitely need a warning before the drop. the beat iunno about. ill hafta look and see what i used since everybody seems to think the drums are lacking. thnx for the input

@egoless and digitsUK thank you much more helpful. i agree that there is something not quite right about this track and i aim to resolve it. hopefully your input will aid me in that. also every other comment on the sub was that it was too phat. personally i think i need to hear it thru a club set up...

wow... helpful