Search found 20 matches

by JLproductions
Fri Oct 07, 2011 3:20 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@ nnny - typing as im listening, like the old record white noiseish sound thats good for effect, love that guitar riff and vocals! id just change that rim shot to something most distinct or layer it up, and needs more of a low end, some sine on the bottom. @ eldoogle - build up is ok, after the drop...
by JLproductions
Mon Sep 19, 2011 1:01 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@ mannyyyyy - decent track man lovin the vocals and drill sounds, only thing id say is there may be a bit too much compression in some places so its just really the mixdown that needs looked at. @ evader - really nice track here well produced! Id just look at the levels n turn the intro snare up a l...
by JLproductions
Sat Jul 30, 2011 7:51 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@ Cheeky - Great gritty track man reminds me of something Kromestar would make, i would be tempted to add a bit more reverb to the main gritty bassline or try out different types. This would help to add more atmosphere and character. @NRHc - This is a very nice track good work. I would reccommend te...
by JLproductions
Thu Jul 28, 2011 11:58 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@ crakasteven - This track is near perfection, had my face scrunching up like a bulldogs face. I would only say to turn down the eerie synth sound when its playing at the same time as the bassline to avoid overlapping because that bass needs room for full effect. Also i wud add in some short fx like...
by JLproductions
Sun Jul 17, 2011 8:52 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

JLproductions, Gotta say I like the idea. I feel the snare doesnt really have enough punch/presence. I feel it could use some additional background elements later in the song. and the song in your sig is friggin awesome! Any chances of a 320 in the future? Hey man, cheers for the feedback i will st...
by JLproductions
Sun Jul 17, 2011 3:14 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

Ive clearly posted my feedback and tune at the wrong time, at the end of the page no one can see, so im just gona post mine again. I hope everyone has edited from my feedback and posted again so i can re-evauate. Here is my WIP atm anyway i hope all will enjoy and give appropriate feedback :) http:/...
by JLproductions
Thu Jul 14, 2011 9:53 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@ therebel730 - Good track i like the variations with the wobble. Only thing i would say is to layer up your snare, get it hitting harder to make the track roll better. Also, there could be more of a low end. A good tip is to duplicate it and on the second one just literally take out all the highs a...
by JLproductions
Sat Jun 04, 2011 11:44 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@ MexicanKangeroo - Track is amazing i cant fault it at all, only the levels really, im hearing alot of hi's but cant hear much bass, other than that amazing for one days work! @ Envision - Good concept, the bass is gritty but i would recommend to duplicate it but take all the hi's out of the second...
by JLproductions
Sat May 14, 2011 11:51 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@ Elsonido - Im liking the intro, nice work on the atmosphere build up and the bass is nice. Id only maybe just turn bring the beat out more it sounds like its just sitting in the background atm, simply just turn it up in the levels. @ MexicanKangeroo - Track is deep man i like it alot, not much to ...
by JLproductions
Thu May 12, 2011 12:13 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@ Paravrais - 'stairs' is amazing, nothing bad to note at all, loving the trumpets and cheeky grimey bass additions, very nice!! @ Isley - Lovin the grimey bass man nice work! One thing tho, just to equalize the beat a little bit, there just seems to be too much low and mid, bring out the highs a bi...
by JLproductions
Wed May 04, 2011 1:04 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@ obzen - im feelin that loads bro, very meaty sub and lovin all the effects! Do agree about the kick though, maybe take some bass out of it or turn up the pitch on it to bring out the sub more...sick track tho man likin it! @ tripwire - the further draft is amazing, reminds me kryptic minds honestl...
by JLproductions
Tue May 03, 2011 9:47 am
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@alexvont12 - Thanks for the feedback man ill work on the mids :) I love the atmosphere in the intro yeh thats nice, feelin the synth aswell good stuff! Only thing i just cudnt hear much low end, think it would sound really melodic with a nice deep sub underneath. @ spucimen - Cheers for your feedba...
by JLproductions
Mon May 02, 2011 10:43 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@ NRHc - the first track im reaally feelin i love the deeper side of dubstep! the sub bass is perfect, only thing id say turn up the snare, or layer it up so it gets more of a kick. second track is sick aswell nice subs again, wack some reverb on the snares make it roll more into each change, and ye...
by JLproductions
Mon May 02, 2011 1:25 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@Elliottm - Thanks for the feedback on Bandwidth :4: I really love the drums in 'drifting' they are so bouncy and energetic, nice work, cant fault anything in that one its genius! Maybe its just my speakers, but the drums sound a little quiet in 'Spring' compared to the bass... Dissorganized http://...
by JLproductions
Mon May 02, 2011 12:01 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Replies: 6119
Views: 675760

Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

@Craggle - amazing track, very jokeresque i like it...only thing id say layer the snare more make it punch more, that would make the track roll better! @buddstep - this song is nasty, however i cant really here much low end to the main gritty bass @Lightshapers - Wicked vibezz, only thing id say the...
by JLproductions
Tue Apr 26, 2011 10:54 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Through The Portal (Deep Vibezz)...***feedback please***
Replies: 1
Views: 277

Through The Portal (Deep Vibezz)...***feedback please***

***Any feed back will be much appreciated*** http://soundcloud.com/jlproductions/jlp-through-the-portal Also check out my Youtube channel for all my tracks and click subscribe to be informed everytime i upload a new tune! http://www.youtube.com/user/JLProductionsdubstep Thanks for Visiting :)
by JLproductions
Fri Apr 08, 2011 11:50 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: JLProductions - Dissorganized (Bass Funky)
Replies: 0
Views: 213

JLProductions - Dissorganized (Bass Funky)

***Any feed back will be much appreciated***

Soundcloud


Also check out my Youtube channel for all my tracks and click subscribe to be informed everytime i upload a new tune!

http://www.youtube.com/user/JLProductionsdubstep

Thanks for visiting :)
by JLproductions
Thu Apr 07, 2011 11:36 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: JLProductions - Freq of Nature (Deep vibezz)
Replies: 3
Views: 493

Re: JLProductions - Freq of Nature (Deep vibezz)

This is what a dog barking at you repetitively sounds like when you are on WAAY TOO MUCH K. So I like it, lol Feedback for Feedback? http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=192829&p=2316240#p2316240 or just comment my soundcloud! :D This is sick man, i could imagine this on PlayMe2 rec...
by JLproductions
Thu Apr 07, 2011 12:48 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: JLProductions - Freq of Nature (Deep vibezz)
Replies: 3
Views: 493

JLProductions - Freq of Nature (Deep vibezz)

***any feedback will be appreciated***
Soundcloud

Also check out my Youtube channel for all my tracks and click subscribe to be informed everytime i upload a new tune!
http://www.youtube.com/user/JLProductionsdubstep

Thanks for visiting :)
by JLproductions
Thu Apr 07, 2011 12:09 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: JLProductions - Square Head (bouncy floor smasher)
Replies: 1
Views: 331

JLProductions - Square Head (bouncy floor smasher)

***any feedback will be appreciated***
Soundcloud

Also check out my Youtube channel for all my tracks and click subscribe to be informed everytime i upload a new tune!
http://www.youtube.com/user/JLProductionsdubstep

Thanks for visiting :)