alexeyhermann - Good production quality, but I'd like to hear the vocals take up more of the mix, or at least alternate between the bass and voice being the focus of the song. As it is now, I think you could probably just take the vocals out and the effect would be the same. Scy7he - nice rhythmic q...

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Vocals aren't that bad, but yeah it doesn't really seem like the two parts of your song fit together.

I need some help.. When i took the track to my car and listened it with the same equalizer settings that i use when i'm normally listening music in my car and the synths did sound little weird. Theys sounded like the bass was too loud and maybe little muddy and the higher end sounded like it was cl...

Sounds much better maza1, the drums really keep the song going.

Yes, I will youtube side chaining and such. I was noticing that my drops don't have that "boom" factor, how do you think I could come upon atleast making the first initial note big and dirty, to set the pace for the rest of the drop because the hardest part for me is laying down that firs...

bozoy: The composition is actually pretty good, and all the synths sound quality too. my only criticism is that the kick is pretty much non-existent, on my setup at least. It sounds like your sub might be covering it up, so it might help to try a little side-chaining. or alot. that might sound pret...

bozoy: The composition is actually pretty good, and all the synths sound quality too. my only criticism is that the kick is pretty much non-existent, on my setup at least. It sounds like your sub might be covering it up, so it might help to try a little side-chaining. or alot. that might sound prett...

dogmancer - no problem haha daftendirekt - upload to zippyshare or soundcloud please :s Sonic Arts - Love the track in your sig I dont kno wif thats your WIP but very good job, and what do you mean by bass track? Subs? I have a sub added, and he talker synth is the bassline, which im going to be me...

@Cthulhu: definitely add a bass track. your synths sound alright, although that talker needs more variation. I think in massive you get that by modulating your wavetable. @AcidRat: sweet drums man. sounds pretty interesting overall, no criticisms. @Dogmancar: Yeah if you want your strings to sound r...

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Not really dubstep. Just experimenting again.

why thank you sir. yeah listened to it a few more times in the car and I think the clap could use some work. Probably try to get the vox to be more bassy too, although maybe its just my car speakers that make them seem more empty.

Alright so I'm trying out another style of music again and came up with this one minute clip. I want to expand it, but I'm not really sure where to go with it. I figured I could get some creative help from some forum members. I can't really imagine a smooth way to get it to build tension. Yeah, it's...

@Tyler J: Musically, it's a pretty cool piece. The structure of the song is a little screwy, but if you're more interested in production I think the first thing you should research is proper EQing. I'm definitely no expert, but I'd probably tone down your kick a little since It sounds like it's inte...

thanks for the feedback man. I don't know why the harpsichord remix was in my sig, it was supposed to be another song. Thanks for reviewing both though! Yeah i spent so much time transposing each note of the sample up a third, I need a bigger transition for it. I think I'll probably do a double time...

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Cyren wrote:Just made a snippet out of 3 tracks, maybe someone give it a listen.

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Thick skinned: Generic snare. Nice intro though, and the bass is pretty interesting. Cool wormy synth around 1:50 and 2:20 too. Nice chord progression, but maybe stick another section in with a different progression to mix it up. Just a thought. Lucidity: During the intro, the bass line is too borin...

Try switching up the beat a little more. It's good, but make it sound better with another beat to contrast it with. Nice feel overall though. This is this is good work.

Wow, good stuff man. Nice intro and nice ending. I like that steady melody you have come in around 0:25. You're right, it has a really cool cinematic quality. Reminded me of the new tron soundtrack. Maybe bring the drums up a little more in the mix though. And try putting just a tad of reverb on the...

@specimen-yarp : really like your style man it reminds me alot of Biometrix idk if you've heard of him but super dope song nonetheless. @sonicarts : im loving the sound of what seems to wobbling bells? lol whatever it is very epic but i think if the pace would get quicker at some point, very good t...

Sup fellas. Just trying out some more classical samples. This one is from Franz Liszt's Totentanz (It's a very angry piece). The synths (there's two) were all made in Massive. Still getting used to not just using the presets on massive, but I feel like these came out pretty well. Massive is a pretty...