Hey DSF,
Just released an EP with the title track of "Horizon." I would love to hear your feedback on the track and the EP as well!
Soundcloud
Cheers,
David
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- Wed May 22, 2013 6:48 pm
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: O, Captain - Horizon [Feedback for Feedback]
- Replies: 0
- Views: 143
- Wed Apr 24, 2013 1:34 pm
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: O, Captain - Electric Drive [Jamstep]
- Replies: 0
- Views: 137
O, Captain - Electric Drive [Jamstep]
Hey forum,
I would love to get some feedback on this song. If you would like my feedback on one of your tracks just say so in the comments!
Soundcloud
Cheers,
David
I would love to get some feedback on this song. If you would like my feedback on one of your tracks just say so in the comments!
Soundcloud
Cheers,
David
- Thu Mar 28, 2013 12:19 am
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: O, Captain - In Pursuit [Feedback for Feedback)
- Replies: 1
- Views: 181
Re: O, Captain - In Pursuit [Feedback for Feedback)
Bump, any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
- Wed Mar 27, 2013 2:20 am
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: O, Captain - In Pursuit [Feedback for Feedback)
- Replies: 1
- Views: 181
O, Captain - In Pursuit [Feedback for Feedback)
Hey forum,
Please give me some feedback on the overall mixdown, mastering, and composition of the track. In return I will give you some feedback on one of your tracks.
Soundcloud
Thanks,
David
Please give me some feedback on the overall mixdown, mastering, and composition of the track. In return I will give you some feedback on one of your tracks.
Soundcloud
Thanks,
David
- Mon Mar 04, 2013 11:30 pm
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: O, Captain - The Storm [Feedback4Feedback]
- Replies: 6
- Views: 956
Re: O, Captain - The Storm [Feedback4Feedback]
I like the melodic intro a lot, really catchy stuff. I sort of agree on the mix, the highs are a little invasive, and I don't get too much of the lows on my headphones. Piano is really creative though, well done on that end. My only other qualm are the drums; the snare and kick are a little corny, ...
- Mon Mar 04, 2013 10:48 pm
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: O, Captain - The Storm [Feedback4Feedback]
- Replies: 6
- Views: 956
Re: O, Captain - The Storm [Feedback4Feedback]
Don't take this the wrong way at all but the mix needs some serious work from my viewpoint.The snare is way to far in the background and lacks some serious top end.The kick gets a bit lost here and there to so that needs a bit of work. I mean the arrangement is really really good and the sound desi...
- Mon Mar 04, 2013 2:29 pm
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: O, Captain - The Storm [Feedback4Feedback]
- Replies: 6
- Views: 956
O, Captain - The Storm [Feedback4Feedback]
Hey forum,
Just finished a track called "The Storm." Please lend your ear and give me some good feedback on how I can improve the song and I will do my best to critique your song as well.
Soundcloud
Thanks!
David
Just finished a track called "The Storm." Please lend your ear and give me some good feedback on how I can improve the song and I will do my best to critique your song as well.
Soundcloud
Thanks!
David
- Thu Feb 28, 2013 3:37 pm
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: Launching website for artists, would love feedback!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 602
Re: Launching website for artists, would love feedback!
Appreciate the post man. I'm building the service I wish was around when I started making music!test recordings wrote:Dunno, no one else is doing it at least
- Thu Feb 28, 2013 3:08 am
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: Launching website for artists, would love feedback!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 602
Re: Launching website for artists, would love feedback!
Not exactly the feedback I was looking for Anyone else?EliteLennon117 wrote:i just love jackin' off to sloth porn how about you m8
- Thu Feb 28, 2013 2:40 am
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: Launching website for artists, would love feedback!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 602
Launching website for artists, would love feedback!
Hey Forum, I'm launching a new blog on March 1st called http://MelodyScore.com that will post a new song from an electronic artist everyday. The song starts at $0.25 and each purchase increases the price until it reaches $0.99 where it stays. I would love your feedback on the idea and what I can do ...
- Thu Feb 21, 2013 2:14 pm
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: Murder Musket-Waiting Rooms (Electronic/Funk)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 299
Re: Murder Musket-Waiting Rooms (Electronic/Funk)
Good positive vibes in this track! - Synth note at 0:42 after the bend seems a little out of place, even if it is in the key - Consider adding some more percussive elements at the beginning of the mix to drive it - Digging the bass line once it comes in around 1:20 - Funky synth solo at around 2 min...
- Sat Feb 09, 2013 11:42 pm
- Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
- Topic: EDM Big Chords
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3971
Re: EDM Big Chords
layer 3-5 synths on top of each other. For the sake of your CPU figure out how to turn on unison in your synths bro. What if you're layering different synths.... :o Exactly what I meant to say- it SHOULD NOT be the same tone synth that's just a different note. It should be 3-5 independent synths, a...
- Sat Feb 09, 2013 5:34 pm
- Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
- Topic: EDM Big Chords
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3971
Re: EDM Big Chords
Like people have been saying in this thread, layer 3-5 synths on top of each other. Pan some of them hard left or right and some of them just off center. Then create harmonies with the note to make it into that massive chord. Ultimately it is going to come down to lots of practice and attempts at ge...
- Thu Jan 31, 2013 1:18 am
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 955
Re: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
@Taosist - Thanks for the kind words! My friends always tell me that I should make video game music so maybe that's worth checking out :) Thanks for the feedback and tip about changing up the song. My feedback for "Under Tension" by you: - Heavy drop, kicked me in the chest! - I'd like to ...
- Wed Jan 30, 2013 1:40 am
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 955
Re: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
@Tyrant City - Thanks for the feedback. I've been contemplating the intro, and I know @Suspense also mentioned that the intro was not to his liking. Thanks for the 2 cents, I appreciate you taking time to listen and comment on my track! Let me know when you come out with a track you want feedback on...
- Tue Jan 29, 2013 10:05 pm
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 955
Re: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
@Suspense: Thanks for the feedback. I've been mulling over the intro. For a while I was thinking about splitting it into two tracks. Thanks for your honesty! Feedback on your "I Need You" remix: - Cool samples, I'm not familiar with the original but I liked to the vocal chopping - Drop cou...
- Tue Jan 29, 2013 5:38 pm
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 955
Re: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
Thanks for the feedback Tordal! I really appreciate the listen and great advice. I'm always wary to put effects on drums but I think a subtle blended reverb on the snare is a great suggestion. For "Get It Up" in your sig here is my feedback: - Good flow throughout the track - I would like ...
- Mon Jan 28, 2013 11:00 pm
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: subkontra - unexpected circumstances
- Replies: 2
- Views: 139
Re: subkontra - unexpected circumstances
- Massive sounds... just huge
- Consider adding a melody during the break section of the song
- It could be just me but the timing seems a little bit off during the second drop (2 minutes in)
Keep it up!
- Consider adding a melody during the break section of the song
- It could be just me but the timing seems a little bit off during the second drop (2 minutes in)
Keep it up!
- Mon Jan 28, 2013 10:55 pm
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: Project 14 - Rain (dubstep/electro)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 415
Re: Project 14 - Rain (dubstep/electro)
- Love the intro! That chord progression is awesome. - At the first drop you might want to consider lowering the volume level of the snare a tiny bit. - Great energy throughout the whole track - At 3 minutes the siren/rising sound could probably be louder at the beginning of it's "ascent" ...
- Mon Jan 28, 2013 6:58 pm
- Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
- Topic: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 955
O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
Hey forum,
Just posted a new song on Soundcloud and I would love to get some feedback on it. In return I will give you feedback on one of your tracks.
Soundcloud
Thanks!
Just posted a new song on Soundcloud and I would love to get some feedback on it. In return I will give you feedback on one of your tracks.
Soundcloud
Thanks!