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by O Captain
Wed May 22, 2013 6:48 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: O, Captain - Horizon [Feedback for Feedback]
Replies: 0
Views: 143

O, Captain - Horizon [Feedback for Feedback]

Hey DSF,

Just released an EP with the title track of "Horizon." I would love to hear your feedback on the track and the EP as well!

Soundcloud

Cheers,
David
by O Captain
Wed Apr 24, 2013 1:34 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: O, Captain - Electric Drive [Jamstep]
Replies: 0
Views: 137

O, Captain - Electric Drive [Jamstep]

Hey forum,

I would love to get some feedback on this song. If you would like my feedback on one of your tracks just say so in the comments!

Soundcloud

Cheers,
David
by O Captain
Thu Mar 28, 2013 12:19 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: O, Captain - In Pursuit [Feedback for Feedback)
Replies: 1
Views: 181

Re: O, Captain - In Pursuit [Feedback for Feedback)

Bump, any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
by O Captain
Wed Mar 27, 2013 2:20 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: O, Captain - In Pursuit [Feedback for Feedback)
Replies: 1
Views: 181

O, Captain - In Pursuit [Feedback for Feedback)

Hey forum,

Please give me some feedback on the overall mixdown, mastering, and composition of the track. In return I will give you some feedback on one of your tracks.

Soundcloud

Thanks,
David
by O Captain
Mon Mar 04, 2013 11:30 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: O, Captain - The Storm [Feedback4Feedback]
Replies: 6
Views: 956

Re: O, Captain - The Storm [Feedback4Feedback]

I like the melodic intro a lot, really catchy stuff. I sort of agree on the mix, the highs are a little invasive, and I don't get too much of the lows on my headphones. Piano is really creative though, well done on that end. My only other qualm are the drums; the snare and kick are a little corny, ...
by O Captain
Mon Mar 04, 2013 10:48 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: O, Captain - The Storm [Feedback4Feedback]
Replies: 6
Views: 956

Re: O, Captain - The Storm [Feedback4Feedback]

Don't take this the wrong way at all but the mix needs some serious work from my viewpoint.The snare is way to far in the background and lacks some serious top end.The kick gets a bit lost here and there to so that needs a bit of work. I mean the arrangement is really really good and the sound desi...
by O Captain
Mon Mar 04, 2013 2:29 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: O, Captain - The Storm [Feedback4Feedback]
Replies: 6
Views: 956

O, Captain - The Storm [Feedback4Feedback]

Hey forum,

Just finished a track called "The Storm." Please lend your ear and give me some good feedback on how I can improve the song and I will do my best to critique your song as well.

Soundcloud

Thanks!
David
by O Captain
Thu Feb 28, 2013 3:37 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Launching website for artists, would love feedback!
Replies: 4
Views: 602

Re: Launching website for artists, would love feedback!

test recordings wrote:Dunno, no one else is doing it at least
Appreciate the post man. I'm building the service I wish was around when I started making music!
by O Captain
Thu Feb 28, 2013 3:08 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Launching website for artists, would love feedback!
Replies: 4
Views: 602

Re: Launching website for artists, would love feedback!

EliteLennon117 wrote:i just love jackin' off to sloth porn how about you m8
Not exactly the feedback I was looking for :lol: Anyone else?
by O Captain
Thu Feb 28, 2013 2:40 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Launching website for artists, would love feedback!
Replies: 4
Views: 602

Launching website for artists, would love feedback!

Hey Forum, I'm launching a new blog on March 1st called http://MelodyScore.com that will post a new song from an electronic artist everyday. The song starts at $0.25 and each purchase increases the price until it reaches $0.99 where it stays. I would love your feedback on the idea and what I can do ...
by O Captain
Thu Feb 21, 2013 2:14 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Murder Musket-Waiting Rooms (Electronic/Funk)
Replies: 5
Views: 299

Re: Murder Musket-Waiting Rooms (Electronic/Funk)

Good positive vibes in this track! - Synth note at 0:42 after the bend seems a little out of place, even if it is in the key - Consider adding some more percussive elements at the beginning of the mix to drive it - Digging the bass line once it comes in around 1:20 - Funky synth solo at around 2 min...
by O Captain
Sat Feb 09, 2013 11:42 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: EDM Big Chords
Replies: 16
Views: 3971

Re: EDM Big Chords

layer 3-5 synths on top of each other. For the sake of your CPU figure out how to turn on unison in your synths bro. What if you're layering different synths.... :o Exactly what I meant to say- it SHOULD NOT be the same tone synth that's just a different note. It should be 3-5 independent synths, a...
by O Captain
Sat Feb 09, 2013 5:34 pm
Forum: Production, Hardware & Technical
Topic: EDM Big Chords
Replies: 16
Views: 3971

Re: EDM Big Chords

Like people have been saying in this thread, layer 3-5 synths on top of each other. Pan some of them hard left or right and some of them just off center. Then create harmonies with the note to make it into that massive chord. Ultimately it is going to come down to lots of practice and attempts at ge...
by O Captain
Thu Jan 31, 2013 1:18 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
Replies: 11
Views: 955

Re: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)

@Taosist - Thanks for the kind words! My friends always tell me that I should make video game music so maybe that's worth checking out :) Thanks for the feedback and tip about changing up the song. My feedback for "Under Tension" by you: - Heavy drop, kicked me in the chest! - I'd like to ...
by O Captain
Wed Jan 30, 2013 1:40 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
Replies: 11
Views: 955

Re: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)

@Tyrant City - Thanks for the feedback. I've been contemplating the intro, and I know @Suspense also mentioned that the intro was not to his liking. Thanks for the 2 cents, I appreciate you taking time to listen and comment on my track! Let me know when you come out with a track you want feedback on...
by O Captain
Tue Jan 29, 2013 10:05 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
Replies: 11
Views: 955

Re: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)

@Suspense: Thanks for the feedback. I've been mulling over the intro. For a while I was thinking about splitting it into two tracks. Thanks for your honesty! Feedback on your "I Need You" remix: - Cool samples, I'm not familiar with the original but I liked to the vocal chopping - Drop cou...
by O Captain
Tue Jan 29, 2013 5:38 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
Replies: 11
Views: 955

Re: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)

Thanks for the feedback Tordal! I really appreciate the listen and great advice. I'm always wary to put effects on drums but I think a subtle blended reverb on the snare is a great suggestion. For "Get It Up" in your sig here is my feedback: - Good flow throughout the track - I would like ...
by O Captain
Mon Jan 28, 2013 11:00 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: subkontra - unexpected circumstances
Replies: 2
Views: 139

Re: subkontra - unexpected circumstances

- Massive sounds... just huge :)
- Consider adding a melody during the break section of the song
- It could be just me but the timing seems a little bit off during the second drop (2 minutes in)

Keep it up!
by O Captain
Mon Jan 28, 2013 10:55 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Project 14 - Rain (dubstep/electro)
Replies: 2
Views: 415

Re: Project 14 - Rain (dubstep/electro)

- Love the intro! That chord progression is awesome. - At the first drop you might want to consider lowering the volume level of the snare a tiny bit. - Great energy throughout the whole track - At 3 minutes the siren/rising sound could probably be louder at the beginning of it's "ascent" ...
by O Captain
Mon Jan 28, 2013 6:58 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)
Replies: 11
Views: 955

O, Captain - Collapse (Feedback for Feedback!)

Hey forum,

Just posted a new song on Soundcloud and I would love to get some feedback on it. In return I will give you feedback on one of your tracks.

Soundcloud

Thanks!