@Applewater I'm against brostep so probably not the best feedback but I think the hats and snare need a bit of reverb. I'm not really a fan of the jerky drums on the intro but then again a lot of my stuff gets called plop! :lol:. personally though The sub feels a bit weak but I can see where its goi...

Tune from 4:30 onwards, I swear this tune has hypnotised me a lot lately and no idea of what it is called.

@randorando I LIKE THE INTRO! reminds me of like a 60's spy movie intro but in a good way gives it some personality!, I like the kick I do think a snare would go better though but I hate claps in general. There we go was waiting for megatron too cock slap me my friend next to me is into brostep and ...

@ standby Loving the break gives a real nice garagey feel (track seems a bit quiet though I'd maybe raise everything a little bit) I like the background pad nice synkroish feeling and the harp sounding instrument. Sounds really nice when the bass comes in (Typical future garagery bassline but it wor...

@LucasKane This shit blew me away! Dubstep tuuuune right there. Great variation, fat fucking bass nice use of effects, reverb, and variation. Definitely something on the dark bassey side, blew my sub up on dat one :) Variation was ace man. Nice use of the sample before and after the drop and the va...

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Give 3 pieces of feedback before posting your WIP to keep the feedback going mate.

@wizardd Not really feeling this the mixdown needs improving the bass is just too in your face for me. I like space when it comes to music there is just too much going for me personally. I'd personally start on building a nice intro first then let it all fall into place the drums seem ok the snare i...

@lucaskane thats some really nice sub love how it wobbles, nice mixdown to hm really hard to find something maybe just try to make the midrangebass little bit louder or cripsier with some tube or something but that would be just on top; very good :W: Thanks man, I really wanted the sub to get movin...

@kes-es I had my speakers all the way up listening to the hats and drums then megatron comes out of nowhere and cock slaps me in the face :o :lol: . I do like the intro the computery vibe I reckon a nice atmospheric FX stretched out behind it maybe from the bluezone artificial FX pack would fit perf...

@ChadDub I'm not too sure what I'm listening to? I don't really know how to feedback it. @jrisreal Clips a bit short, Everything works well sounds a bit too happy go lucky for me though (I like my shit dark like guinness) get a good few minutes going of it then post so I can give some real FB. @deja...

@lucaskane - ok, piano more front and center now, now add some verb and a little delay, roll some off the top end and it'll be perfect. Add some more high end phrases on the piano too and you have it done. Think I found someone who loves pianos as much as me haha!, ah good idea with the high end ph...

Thanks for all the feedback!

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deafblindmusic wrote:@lucaskane - my only comment, I'd really like to hear that piano being explored more, you tease it early but then it goes away.

I was planning on using the piano throughout and having no mid bass but I decided to try a different direction. Might open another project and go the other route!

@ Paravrais Out of the ordinary this, I like the off beat drums. I personally don't like the sub I think if it was lowered a bit so it really rumbles my sub then it would sound a lot smoother, some alteration to the bassline aswell would go nice after say 32 after the drop. I like the atmosphere as ...

@lucaskane - I would do more for a tune before posting a WIP =\ Overall really nice vibe, freakin' love that snare you've made, really nice. Tbh I don't understand the wobbles thrown in. I mean they work, but I just don't why they're there :) My bad I make an intro then about 32 bars after the drop...

@ DubMikey I like the intro up till the lead came in (Kinda reminds of a old snes lead if thats what you were going for) I'm anti-brostep lol, The kick and snare sound very weak on my speakers and there doesnt seem to be a sub only mid bass? @Raincity206 Drums sound fine the snare seems a bit weak m...

Waking up to a empty house, and the sun is shining.

@BudSpencertron I like the intro and the vocal, but when it drops it feels a bit weak the snare I don't personally like but I do like the mid bass maybe make the sub a bit more stronger then it will sway nicely. (I do really like the atmosphere though) @Mirrors Intro is a bit long cut it too around ...

What DAW do you use? FL Studio 9 How long have you been producing for? Around about 6 months give or take a few, first few months though was just messing around when I'm a bit stoned. Only really started going for it in the last 3 I would say What VSTs do you favour? MASSIVE :) What artists/labels ...