thanks a lot for the feedback. i really appreciate it! i will try to correct the things you mentioned and will re-upload the track once i've done it.

L.E.: Here it is. The new version.

http://www.mixcloud.com/RsX/rsx-requiem-for-a-dub-vip/

i'm sure it could be definitely improved... but it can't be that bad that it leaves you speechless...

no one?!

no need to bang your head on the wall mate, good tune, liked it, but, as it was already said, i guess you could try and change some little bits of the bass, it gets predictable after a while... 'nuff said, overall a good tune and i liked it cheers!

hi, guys, this is my first tune ever and i thought i would share it with you, maybe get a couple of hints and stuff from guys who know their business such as everyone around here, i'm sure! :)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oqHdsH224So

I usually just mix tune together, i'm not a producer, but i ...