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by Avi8or
Mon Jul 25, 2011 1:53 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (need feedback)
Replies: 14
Views: 1099

Re: Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (need feedback)

Thanks for the feed back man, it's promptly noted....since this is the thread that is getting the attention, I"ll just let anyone else know that has commented previously that have been messing with the levels again, and it's marked in my signature so you can listen to it....again, I KNOW it's n...
by Avi8or
Sun Jul 24, 2011 7:06 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Took a mind break, need some pointers and advice
Replies: 1
Views: 171

Re: Took a mind break, need some pointers and advice

So hard to get any feedback in a feeback forum... :u: :i: :corncry:
by Avi8or
Sun Jul 24, 2011 9:19 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Riggadale - One Warning (Jump THE FUCK UPPPPP!!)
Replies: 9
Views: 1099

Re: Jump THE FUCK UPPPPP!! , Riggadale - One Warning (320)

Your synths are out of control man, I love'em....I dig the whole track actually, I just wish it was a little faster feeling because I feel that this one could be a crowd pumper with some zing tossed into it....other than that just being my own opinion, love your work man...keep it up.
by Avi8or
Sun Jul 24, 2011 9:10 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Free DL- Haru Song (Hania)- Quarl Remix
Replies: 2
Views: 349

Re: Free DL- Haru Song (Hania)- Quarl Remix

Im really digging this man...you should stick it up as a .mp3 though :\
by Avi8or
Sun Jul 24, 2011 9:06 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Dubstep, 8 Bit and chuck norris ;)
Replies: 1
Views: 355

Re: Dubstep, 8 Bit and chuck norris ;)

I don't really know if the first drop is supposed to sound like that to me, but it sounds a bit un-structured, if it is supposed to sound like that then hell yeah....It could also use a bit more meat to it in the lower distorted bass...I really like from 1:19 to 1:53, more growl though.... the final...
by Avi8or
Sun Jul 24, 2011 8:37 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Took a mind break, need some pointers and advice
Replies: 1
Views: 171

Took a mind break, need some pointers and advice

Hello again, So I took about a week away from Ableton and staring at the computer screen because me not being able to get my levels right has really started to discourage me... It has seemed no matter what I am clipping, or something is fighting with another element of my song, and nothing is coming...
by Avi8or
Fri Jul 15, 2011 6:01 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Maximillian originals [feedback4feedback]
Replies: 7
Views: 975

Re: Maximillian originals [feedback4feedback]

I'll help you out man, I like your style, very dark and ambient, from what I listened too, I am new to production so I can't really give you any pointers, just that I would like to see some more up tempo stuff from you. I have a thread if you'd like to hear my 2nd song. Cheers!
by Avi8or
Fri Jul 15, 2011 5:02 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (need feedback)
Replies: 14
Views: 1099

Re: Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (need feedback)

See, I sit here and I listen to my track, then I listen to other tracks, and mine just seems to not have a voice...it seems so quiet and unrefined...and thats what is frustrating is that I can't seem to get levels right to save my life :(
by Avi8or
Fri Jul 15, 2011 4:40 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (need feedback)
Replies: 14
Views: 1099

Re: Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (need feedback)

Wow, wasn't expecting so much feedback, and sorry about my retaliation post, I was a little touchy that day mate. No harm no foul? Back to my track, I have spent the past day and a half or so, attempting to work on levels, and hi-passing things that don't need bass, and working on making my kick, sn...
by Avi8or
Wed Jul 13, 2011 8:52 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (need feedback)
Replies: 14
Views: 1099

Re: Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (need feedback)

Bells in the beg are too loud. The snare is shit, get a new sample. Your vocal samples are also not mixed properlly. There too loud and outa context. Everything is competing for space here its all crammed together. That slow moving bass thing is overpwering the mix. Like the arpeggio. The drums dis...
by Avi8or
Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:30 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (need feedback)
Replies: 14
Views: 1099

Re: Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (need feedback)

Yeah I knew the mixing was completely off, I have found a few sites that give you pointers here and there, but no matter how I mix my levels it seems that I am always clipping the master channel and it's really frustrating because then I start messing with things again and things that were coming th...
by Avi8or
Wed Jul 13, 2011 4:58 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (need feedback)
Replies: 14
Views: 1099

Re: Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (need feedback)

WTB Feedback... :(

This is only my second song I've ever written, and I want to make this one flawless, any feedback, helpful suggestions and comments are really wanted.
by Avi8or
Tue Jul 12, 2011 6:22 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Trazom (New mix) feedback?
Replies: 2
Views: 374

Re: Trazom (New mix) feedback?

Pretty banging my friend, I felt like I was transforming the whole time I was listening. I really dig the melodic tonal singing and synth in between the wub wub wubs and yah yah yahs. The orchestra instruments towards the end were A+ too my friend. Rad track. I would appreciate some feedback from yo...
by Avi8or
Tue Jul 12, 2011 6:19 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Hyperdigical - "Keys" ( feedback appreciated)
Replies: 1
Views: 226

Re: Hyperdigical - "Keys" ( feedback appreciated)

Here is my personal opinion, and don't take me as an expert, i've only been doing this about 5 months...but to me you need a little bit more wobble in there some where, and the intro drums right before the drop I guess you could say are a little too much, seems like you might have took them to 1/32 ...
by Avi8or
Tue Jul 12, 2011 5:51 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (need feedback)
Replies: 14
Views: 1099

Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (need feedback)

Hey there, Just letting you guys hear a preview of my first track I am actually excited about (for some reason didn't get a response on my last thread)... I am new to the production world, have only been doing about 5 months, and really not even that because I didn't do anything for 3 months.... Rec...
by Avi8or
Mon Jul 11, 2011 10:42 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: [Feedback] Butterfly - Kaiori Breathe
Replies: 7
Views: 679

Re: [Feedback] Butterfly - Kaiori Breathe

I don't know if you've ever heard of Dakent, but thats who you remind me of, but you have your very own unique flare, I freaking love every bit of your style and tracks....incredible. Let me know where I can buy some tracks and im there :P
by Avi8or
Mon Jul 11, 2011 10:19 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (Original WIP)
Replies: 0
Views: 135

Avi8or - Not Evil, Medieval (Original WIP)

Hey everyone, I was kind of cautious of posting a preview to my song on here, one because I know how forums can be, but hopefully this one won't be so bad, I am honestly here to learn from others and to get constructive guidance from those who are willing to give it. I have only been messing around ...