You've got a point there. More like a few actually :) I think i will be moving on from this song pretty soon and am gonna focus on a newer one. The next one will sound most likely alot better thanks to everyones feedback and will hopefully sound more professional. And next time i remaster something ...
Thanks everybody for the help you guys. I just put up the remastered version and hope that you give just as excellent feedback on the new version as you did here
Please let me know what you would do to improve my song, or any tips you might happen to have for me in general
Stay on the lookout for more songs by me on my soundcloud page
I would really appreciate some constructive criticism so if you happen to listen to the song be sure to add your two cents (any comment is highly appreciated)
These are my first songs so far AND my first post on this forum. Hopefully many more of both to come! Id love to know what yall think of my tracks even if they are sorta bad