I uploaded a tweaked version.

Really though, any constructive criticism at all would be much appreciated. :/

Hi all. :) Just started getting into my dubstep and decided to start making tunes. Found a gold mine of information on these forums, so thanks for that! From the UK with a mainly DnB background. Please leave me some feedback on my tune if you get a chance. http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f...

My first dubstep tune, obviously based on a famous tune by a similar name. Would love to get some feedback and advice.

Thanks in advance.

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