Still looking for some feedback. Anything. Production, songwriting, etc.

dude you are my fucking hero...I used to be a huge In Flames fan back in the day, and still kick it to their pre-Reroute stuff every so often. I would love to know how you did this man.

bump

Anything guys?

Pretty sick. As the above poster mentioned, those hats could be louder, and that synth is a little too piercing. Maybe I just prefer bassier sounds though

Thanks man. I definitely hear what you mean. I feel like I fixed up the production a lot, but may need to add a little bit more compression on the drums.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/15592456/Earth%20and%20Sky.mp3

Thoughts?

Hey guys, first post here

This is a song I've been working on for about a week now. I'm looking for feedback more on the production than the songwriting, since I'm still pretty new to electronic music as a whole, but both are welcome.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/15592456/Earth%20and%20Sky.mp3 ...