I'd say the biggest weakness would be tuning, I'd suggest working on that a bit more.

After that the bass is very powerful but the drums are being overpowered so either need to beef them up a bit more or eq out some of your bass to make room for them (or a bit of both)

With the soundcloud thing ...

You should be careful when you are flaming people that are giving you feedback.

These people are only trying to help you out.

I can hear exactly what everyone else is trying to say and you seem to know what is 'wrong' with your tracks so why not delete the ones you already have work on them and ...

bump?

I'm not a huge fan of steady beat stuff, but this is pretty awesome! I think youre midrange vowely sounds need to be a little bit thicker and heavier, and honestly I think theres room in that melody for a different drop the second time, something reallly cool could be done with that.

I love the ...

Riddles wrote: Not really noticing any sub bass, which is kinda the point of dubstep.
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I'm not really concerned with the 'point' of dubstep. I'm concerned about my lack of sub because I want a strong sub in there, not because thats what dubstep is about.

Your percussion in all of your tunes is very boring, the actual sounds are very bland, try using ones or make your own.
Not really noticing any sub bass, which is kinda the point of dubstep.
Your midrangey tunes are very messy. The midrange noises take over everything and it doesn't flow very well ...

I like the ideas in the first one alot, just work on getting some of those frequencies reined in a bit, Make sure the sub bass is nice and low, with the kick just above that (bass wise).

Maybe you should think about getting some monitors? Even really small monitors will be loads better than ...

Your tracks are all just a mess of frequencies.
Your midrange is so unfocused it just sounds noisy.
Do you know what you're trying to achieve??

Most of it sounds very sloppy.

Sorry if I'm being overly critical.
I just don't think folks should post everything and anything on SC.
Quality control is ...

nothing?

ALSO NOTE, the two in the middle I made in one night, so be gentle! the top and bottom two are much more complete.

Hey everybody! I've been making music for a little under a year, and here we have some of the first 'songs' I've ever made. Usually I focus heavily on ground-up production and don't spend much time on song structure, just melodies and technical aspects. But I've finally started to delve into some ...

ill try to have a new mix up soon

Thanks to all of you for the feedback!Really appreciated!

@rainbo: I too was kinda uneasy about the note sequence - AND the intro is a little weak in my eyes. I did spend some time on the arrangement, but I did put it up a little early because i wanted some feedback on everything else (Mainly the ...

ableton live
laptop
any 4 channel mixer
M-Audio trigger finger


and youve got it.

Well I like what i hear out of my headphones, Ill have to wait til im around a sub to get the full thing, i could definitely sense some unexpressed sub in there. Super spacey and minimal, very chill and relaxing. Good mixes, i just thought some of the chimes were a TAD too high on the top half, but ...

Thanks a bunch to both of you! I couldnt agree with you more on the bass issues. I do have my sub and my synth sidechained to my kicks', just need to lower the threshold and do some eq'ing. I spend all my god damn money going to shows so I havent been able to get some monitors haha, but I'm working ...

really like the sound man. I feel like the first drop could be a little more epic, a little more dynamic. I love the piano, its a TAD sharp on the high end. And i feel like your kick could cut through more, LOVE the snare.

has a great melody to it, a great subtle drive too. Check out my first song ...

iim not a huge fan of the moombahton style, but you nailed it pretty good. I think the drums need to cut through and maybe more of a thick midrange on that synth, but thats just my taste. I think a more dynamic song stucture is due, really work on that 'drop' to get it to really hook people, rly ...

it couldjust be my personal stylings, but your bass seems to havetoo much midrange and not enough bass. Drums are nicely designed but need to cut through some more. I think a more dynamic drop is needed. Also those kinda screechy FX in the intro and whatnot need to be a lil more dynamic - there ...

Hey thanks man! youre literally the first person to judge this track musically haha. I know the mix is terrible, the drums are atrocious. I have no monitors, its really a struggle. I come from an artistic background rather than a pure musical background, so i focus more on the creative side and dont ...