Thanx for feedback. Ya, maybe you're right. I think too, that I miss something here.

Thanx, man. You too, you too. Your music for me - something new. Keep up with it.

Firstly, you should keep musical dimension in action.
Secondly, I think, there is not a lot of instruments. Some FX can help here.

Oh man, so good tune, but I think, that drums, especially snare, should be softly. You should change it. Yup!
And tune reminds me music from "Sonic the Hedgehog 2" itself. I like it so much.

I think, that from 1:52 you should jump straight to 2:15.
And do something more interesting with that pit from 2:15 to 2:48.

What about name? Maybe "Yield!", "Somersault"?

Hey all!!!
I'm going to finish my second track for my first EP in breaks style.
But before that I tried myself in dubstep. Here:

https://soundcloud.com/taosist/taosist-under-tension

Nobody wants this tune to be released, so, I decided to share with it here for asking you, guys, to help me in ...