on porn for the drop, drop out the kicks and bass a measure or 2 before hand because it the bass is the same before it drops it doesn't go anywhere. for the vocals also i would mix them with up front vocals and behind vocals (i hope you understand what i mean.) for warfare bring down the snare in th...

trying changing the airy noise when the bass goes

sounds like a lot of sub, so try spltting you main wobbles into more than one channel and bring down the sub a bit.

try splitting your main synth(s) sound into more channels and messing with the effects so it is a derivative from the main synth.

all the parts around the "main meat" of the track just seem to me like, its not cluttered but too much going on.

has a peculiar shuffle to it, additionally it seems repetitive after a while but it sounds well made though. maybe have the drums come through a bit more.

i personally think the snare is fine, dont want it to cut the flow of the track. also it has nice flow good job.

so here is probably the best track i have personally made so far and i am looking for some critics.

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enjoy.

thanks the feedback is really appreciated

looking for additional feedback from some dub heads thanks.

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