The intro didn't do it for me so much. I think your strength is definitely in everything after the drop.

I did feel like it was lacking a bit of bottom end, but tight production, sick track!

Definitely would love to hear some more variety on the tail end of the track. Loving the ambience!

Had a blast making this track. Any and all criticisms are welcome. If it's shit tell me why. If it made you cum tell me why.

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http://soundcloud.com/jordan-hunter-1/take-it-back This is the first track I've ever created using Ableton Live. This is going to become the last minute of the song. I'm looking for ways to create and incorporate a darker side to the song. Any thoughts on my mix or any of my elements? I'm brand new...

I like this tune. The arpeggiated synth gets a little annoying after a while, but nice job overall.

Awesome job. I'm not so much a fan of the piano, but that's just my taste. You're really good at it though.