Here's some of my new stuff feedback very welcome!

http://soundcloud.com/jeremypatten/uhh

http://soundcloud.com/jeremypatten/nectar2

alright thanks for the feedback and yeah the melody is o.k but i want to make something a little more up beat sort of like Feed Me and the like but i dont know how to make all the crazy sounds and put them together to make something audible meh i guess it just takes practice like anything else. ill ...

Okay so my title is sort of a joke but also id just like to take a minute and say hi to everyone this is my first post on this forum. Now i know my tracks arent "up to par" but this song is my second attempt at making a song (a dubstep song for that matter) also im very very new to any music ...