@olliescot: i feel the kick isnt coming through enough, really nice track but for me needs just a little push. (not that im in any position to really comment)

@Koalablu: i like it, the mids are a little harsh, maybe bring in some sort of melody? (i realise it was done a while ago so prob changed it ...

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Any opinions appreciated, Thanks.

@agent47,

really like it, only on laptop speakers now so cant comment, but will check it when im home

http://soundcloud.com/willoughbymason/untitled

never posted on forum before, just read and listened to stuff, thought i should try the feedback page as just wanna get some honest response and how to better tracks,

something a little darker than normal. getting quite into writting this darker ...

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still need to add one more part in the brushes breakdown
any feedback appreciated
thanks

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still need to add one more part in the brushes breakdown
any feedback appreciated
thanks