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by OSHIBKA
Mon Jul 23, 2012 2:07 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)
Replies: 9
Views: 1557

Re: Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)

masterchief wrote:
Jeffoproductions1 wrote:Some creepy chords there, you don't hear them much these days. I like the wobble bass you got on this.
what chords?
I think he meant the stuff starting at 0:28. Though I guess they are arpeggios rather than chords.
by OSHIBKA
Sun Jul 22, 2012 6:41 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)
Replies: 9
Views: 1557

Re: Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)

I like the intro a lot. I agree with the guy who said the wobble sounds out of sync. It sounds a little awkward at places like 0:33-0:34 where the lead synth doesn't seem to "match" up with the wobble's beat. Also maybe it would sound better if you lower the pitch of the wobble by an octav...
by OSHIBKA
Sun Jul 22, 2012 6:36 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: OSHIBKA - Ice (Chillout Dubstep)
Replies: 1
Views: 400

OSHIBKA - Ice (Chillout Dubstep)

I actually made this dubstep track about a month before I posted my first dubstep thread on here, but since I haven't shown it to many people, I want to put it on here. I used FL Studio 7 to make this track. It's technically a work in progress since I haven't yet put together an "ending" t...
by OSHIBKA
Sun Jul 22, 2012 6:25 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: DJ 5ONE - Pass The Time [DUB/REGGAE VIBE]
Replies: 5
Views: 934

Re: DJ 5ONE - Pass The Time [DUB/REGGAE VIBE]

Maybe it's just my personal taste, but I'm not a fan of that G-A-C chord that you keep using up until about 3:30. I would suggest using an A-C-E or C-E-A chord, and vary them up. But I like your use of white noise and I think you successfully captured the "chill-out" effect.
by OSHIBKA
Sun Jul 22, 2012 6:16 pm
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Atela ft Silva Dan - Some Sort of Sound (deep/chilled)
Replies: 12
Views: 1482

Re: Atela ft Silva Dan - Some Sort of Sound (deep/chilled)

Maybe add a lead synth/instrument to spice things up a little bit? It's a chill track but it's kind of redundant.
by OSHIBKA
Thu Jul 19, 2012 4:11 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: [Ambient Dubstep] New Raven - Swanshore
Replies: 7
Views: 1168

Re: [Ambient Dubstep] New Raven - Swanshore

Haha, i know, it's such a huge cliche now to have the rain effect, gonna try something more complex next time. Also you're not the first to say the intro's a bit long, i don't know, i personally like the feeling it has, but i will have to put that into consideration. Cheers for the feedback, I'll t...
by OSHIBKA
Thu Jul 19, 2012 4:05 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: [Ambient Dubstep] New Raven - Swanshore
Replies: 7
Views: 1168

Re: [Ambient Dubstep] New Raven - Swanshore

Yay, another dubstep track with rain/weather effects! The intro's a bit long. I know it was meant to be atmospheric, but as I was listening, I was waiting for something more interesting to come in. When the percussion came in, I started liking the song better, though it's still repetitive toward the...
by OSHIBKA
Thu Jul 19, 2012 3:58 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Tympanista - Pregame (Harsh dubstep/drumstep[?], dnb)
Replies: 3
Views: 699

Re: Tympanista - Pregame (Harsh dubstep/drumstep[?], dnb)

I can't comment much on the levels since I'm new at that stuff too, but you have quite the dissonance going at around 2:14 with the minor bass contrasting with the happy-go-lucky major synth up top. I can't say it's good or bad because I don't know if it was your intended effect, but it's unusual at...
by OSHIBKA
Thu Jul 19, 2012 3:42 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Riotz & Leviathan - Cannibal (Riotstep)
Replies: 3
Views: 483

Re: Riotz & Leviathan - Cannibal (Riotstep)

It sure is heavy. Good work with the bass, though I prefer to have lighter parts to balance things out. The only thing that bothers me is that hi-hat that appears at 0:04, 0:10 and elsewhere in the song. It sounds like it's panned far to the left and it's annoying to listen to when there isn't some...
by OSHIBKA
Thu Jul 19, 2012 3:40 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Blaze - Tank! (Nearly as heavy as the Tank itself)
Replies: 8
Views: 1277

Re: Blaze - Tank! (Nearly as heavy as the Tank itself)

The bass/drums seem all right but I'm not a fan of the samples. They need to be made stronger, maybe either making them louder, boosting the bass, or adding reverb. But the way you have them now make them weak-sounding compared to the other stuff in the track.
by OSHIBKA
Thu Jul 19, 2012 2:41 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: OSHIBKA - Slam
Replies: 5
Views: 748

Re: OSHIBKA - Slam

Thanks for the advice. I've never heard of Rustie before, so I'll check that out if my music really does resemble his stuff! By drums, what do you mean specifically? The heavy stuff you hear in the very beginning are just one of the default hits that comes with FL Studio with some reverb added. As f...
by OSHIBKA
Thu Jul 19, 2012 2:23 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: newcomers -> introduce yourself here
Replies: 4178
Views: 3188137

Re: newcomers -> introduce yourself here

Hello everyone! I've been making electronic music in FL Studio for a while and have recently been getting interested in making dubstep. I've checked out a lot of tutorials on YouTube and I think that I've getting there, but I definitely need some help from the forum members on here. Looking forward ...
by OSHIBKA
Thu Jul 19, 2012 2:19 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Onyxcloud -Organ Donor- [experimental-dubstep]
Replies: 12
Views: 2030

Re: Onyxcloud -Organ Donor- [experimental-dubstep]

Your track has too many loud sounds going on at once, it makes it hard to listen to. Try to do something about the parts with white noise and those hi-hats - maybe turn down the volume on them or pan them differently? Or maybe take them out altogether. The wobbles sound fine to me though, better th...
by OSHIBKA
Thu Jul 19, 2012 2:15 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: OSHIBKA - Slam
Replies: 5
Views: 748

OSHIBKA - Slam

Here's my latest track. It's still a work in progress - I'm not sure if I want to leave things as they are, or if I want to expand and develop a whole new section of the song after this track. But before I move on, I want to know how what I have so far sounds. I made this track in FL Studio 7, using...
by OSHIBKA
Thu Jul 19, 2012 2:03 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: kiene - alone
Replies: 10
Views: 1546

Re: kiene - alone

This is great! It reminds me a lot of Burial with the vocals and the rain effects.
by OSHIBKA
Thu Jul 19, 2012 2:01 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: new wip got that swank to it
Replies: 4
Views: 617

Re: new wip got that swank to it

It seems all right for the most part, but I think you could do better with the kicks/hi-hats. Vary up the kicks a little bit and it will make the track seem less robotic, I think.
by OSHIBKA
Thu Jul 19, 2012 1:52 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Riotz & Leviathan - Cannibal (Riotstep)
Replies: 3
Views: 483

Re: Riotz & Leviathan - Cannibal (Riotstep)

It sure is heavy. Good work with the bass, though I prefer to have lighter parts to balance things out. The only thing that bothers me is that hi-hat that appears at 0:04, 0:10 and elsewhere in the song. It sounds like it's panned far to the left and it's annoying to listen to when there isn't somet...
by OSHIBKA
Thu Jul 19, 2012 1:47 am
Forum: Dubs & Tunes for Feedback
Topic: Onyxcloud -Organ Donor- [experimental-dubstep]
Replies: 12
Views: 2030

Re: Onyxcloud -Organ Donor- [experimental-dubstep]

Your track has too many loud sounds going on at once, it makes it hard to listen to. Try to do something about the parts with white noise and those hi-hats - maybe turn down the volume on them or pan them differently? Or maybe take them out altogether. The wobbles sound fine to me though, better tha...