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wub wrote:Link doesn't work.

I like the drums a lot man. HUGE bass too. Crazy deep. I like it. I don't have a lot of criticism, this is much better than my abilities.

Bass is very cool. Dark man. I like it.

Very cool bassline. Could use more variation but the mix sounds nice. I enjoy the bass synth too. Good tune. Well done.

Man I really enjoyed this. Very cool and well mixed. That bass is deep and you got a great beat going. Very well done.

Thanks man. When I started doing this 8 months ago I swore to myself I would never use a wobble pack or anything of the sort. I really want to push myself to be original and stay true to me. How might I go about learning what sounds go where in a frequency spectrum?

Be harsh!

Any other criticisms please?

Thanks I'll try and fix that.

wub wrote:Link doesn't work.

SoundcloudI tried to post the song directly In here like these before but I'm not sure if it worked. I'm on my phone right now sorry. I know the Mix needs work but I don't know anything about mixing. Any other critiques?!

Also, I did use some kick,snare, and hi hat samples. I found a couple different ones and layered and EQed them. I don't know if that is bad?

Hahaha I wasn't sure what the title should be. It seems no one on the Internet is interested in anything unless they can hurt someone's feelings or been unnessesarily rude. I thought people would jump at the opportunity to put my track down. Do you know if I can rename this thread? I've those really...

Thanks man I'm flattered! I didn't use any loops or sample packs. Made it all from scratch. I've spent over 40 hours on it so far.

Thricton wrote:sounds like you used a sample pack for your drums and wobbles...my advice....watch youtube...nothing better than creating your own music

I've also been studying synthesis for a couple weeks now, making my own synths. Anyone know anything that might help with that?

@Thriction Thnaks man Im flattered! No loops or "sample packs" here. I made it all from scratch.

I'm really looking to step up my production so any kind of critisizm is very welcome. I'm also practicing producing drum and bass and experimenting with some drumstep. Thank you.

Shameless Bump?

So this is basically the first thing I've ever made. I know its shit but give me some constructive criticism so I can improve. Please and Thank you.

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