thanks for feedback

Bit repetitive get some more variation in there, some good ideas in there not a fan of all the timbre choices but some are good. drums sound downed out.

sounds good chilled background music. i think that downward wobble sequence could be more prominent in the mix.

Intro was a bit static but after the drop i enjoyed it thoroughly.

Sounds good, interesting rhythms good enough to make me follow you.

Great atmosphere just needs further developing and mix though i cant suggest anything mix wise because I'm also have no monitors.

Above poster nailed it please try to fix the static/dry sound. Chuck in some reverb, chorus, phaser. a drum beat.

Needs way more variation, vocals sound flat, overall average track I think i can hear presets in there or just commonly/overused sounds too much. drums need a lot of work

Must be a bad sign when you can see clipping just from the soundcloud waveform. Nice idea though keep at it.

Doesn't sound to great on my crap headphones but enjoyed the overall layout(percussion, chimes, pads, etc) I'd love to hear a bit more variation on the main motif and drums but the percussion sounds very rhythmical.

Agree with above poster, bit too much mid-range screech for me but if that's what your going for good work. Might do well with a smooth silky timbre to contrast the distortion.

Sounds really interesting, nice atmosphere/vibes.

Mixed on crappy headphones feedback would really help me out thanks.
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