The snare is a normal Vengeance Snare... It's just EQ'd with some delayed reverb

I wasn't a fan of the intro at all. But around a minute it picks up quite nicely. I like the break at 2:00.. I like the changes in the track. Just not liking the intro

Thanks for the feedback. It seems people have been liking the song so I'm glad of that as well

Anyone else?

Anything positive? Anything else negative other than vocals?

Hmm.. I didn't hear that on my side.. I will look into it

This is for a contest.. Once again I have only been producing for about three months but I think I am getting better. Any criticism is always welcome.

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Yea I would love some female vocals on this.. but don't have any

Love the sound clips.. The overall track is alright.. I listened through the whole thing so in that aspect I suppose you've done a pretty good job.

It's fairly basic.. The sounds are pretty generic and get annoying over time... Also the kick seems to get drowned in the synths and bass...

I pressed play.. and then about a minute and a half later realized I had.. intro is too long but I like this a lot as background.. I was bobbing my head and remembered to come leave feedback lol.. It progresses slowly but I like that feel. I'm going to follow you on SC. If you get a chance leave ...

Hoping for more feedback

I like this track a lot.. Way laid back and then it shifts into a nice little groove without losing the melody that makes it strong. Love it

I went ahead and upped the levels of the kick and snare.. Not in this mix but in a new one.. I agree it helped a bit.. I'm not sure how to vary the arrangement yet but I'm getting to it.Thanks for the feedback

I'm not sure what is going on but I know I like it

Sounds legit.. I'm a fan

SO this is a remix of the Cows Cows Cows video right? I mean the synth kind of sounds the same and your name and all? Nevermind either way I enjoyed it lol

Well I had to turn it up to really hear what was going on. The Kick is definitely too low but you already mentioned that.
When the keys come in it really brings life to this track as do the strings.. I think they take over a bit though and it almost sounds as if the strings hit an offkey but I may ...

This is dirty.. Seriously.. Dirty.. Very Nice

The modulation on the voice is over the top.. It takes over the track and is offbeat quite a bit... At times it is nice but at other times it is simply distracting.