I can't say I have heard the original, but I am digging this beat. The 808 kick is killer.

I think the mix could be tweaked, I think the snares could be brought out a bit more, they seem to get a bit lost in the lead. Same with the hats.

its pretty cool, very dark and minimal. i love that percussion you have in there, nice with the reverb on it.
my only problem with this tune was the melody to the bassline, it didnt feel resolved.

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pretty cool, youve got some wicked sounds in here. i love the dark, gritty vibes to it. I dont really have much feedback here, most things here are pretty good. you could try changing up the bass or drums a bit to give some more variety, i suppose it depends where you want to take the song.

pretty cool tune, i think the synth is a little loud and off-beat in parts so i found it a little hard to get into a rhythm.

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cool, nice vibe here! I liked the arp in the background, it fit perfectly.
Big drop, got my head moving. Pretty well mixed too, big ups!

its not bad. I wasnt feeling the vocals. The were clashing with the melody, they seemed out of time even.

I think you can work on the melody a bit too, maybe change it up or try a different synth.

I really enjoyed the drums and percussion though, they sounded quite nice with the bass.

Listening to them now, theyre pretty good. I can point out a few things you can work on though. The mixdowns in all the tracks are pretty good. I can hear everything clearly, nothing it too loud or too quiet, so well done here. I think you can change up your drums a bit. The same pattern over and ov...

this is sick dude, love the wobbles in the drop, such a dope sound.

I think the vocals at the start could be a little louder, giver a little more impact to the intro. otherwise this ones really good! big ups

Yeah I really like this one, wicked sounds in there. A few things I noticed, I think the snare needs a bit more work, it cuts off pretty quickly, it needs a little more tail end. You also need a bit more of a breakdown, the drop is relentless and it sounds amazing, but there needs to be a bit of a b...

andyyhitscar wrote:it sounds like a bad Dillon Francis tune, try to focus more on melodies and harmonies than on physicality.

I agree with this. You have made a good start and got a beat going but include a little more melody into the drop. Sounds here are pretty good, the drums could do with some more variation.

love the sounds here, sick vibes.

evil! i like it. i think you just need to work on the mix a little more. the hats and snares could be brought out a little more. i think the charlie vocal sample at the start is a bit loud too.

the bass is dope though, loving the vibes on it.

wicked sounds here. pretty well mixed, track. the tune has an evil vibe to it, I really enjoyed listening to this one.

great idea to donate proceeds for charity, I hope you can raise plenty of money for a great cause. big ups dude!

i think the lead here is a little too basic.the bass is pretty good. I think the drums could be beefed up a little.

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First dubstep tune I ever heard. Heard it in the car on the radio and had to stop everything while it played. Being into mostly electro at that time, hearing dubstep like this blew me away.

nice tune, was not expecting the drop.

i think the drums could be brought out more in the mix. I think that the snare could be a little brighter than what it is now.

nice and deep. sweet sub, nice melody over the top.

The drums could do with some more variation. Especially from where you go from hits of the sub bass to full on bass chorus; even if it something small like the introduction of hats.

overall a pretty good effort

cool track. the more I listened to it the more I enjoyed it.

I'm not sure about the work with the sub and drums in the drop though. maybe a kick on every beat to keep up the intensity or a more defined kick/snare pattern to keep a consistent rhythm