the second one is just epic.

the whole thing sounds like getter tbh, i dont know if thats a good or bad thing.. oh wow : the bass sound is so massively overused. try to make somethin more original. epic intro tho ruff : lots of bass ! in the drop i think they are overpowering and you cant hear the kicks very well. huh damn : hu...

awesome track bro. sounds sick. good job

very nice bro this kicks hard hard. you got a new follower

its very nice but i think you can make the main bass harder and punchier. also the kicks. listen to some getter stuff , you can learn alot from his productions. his bass shakes headphones. I think your track needs that and it'll kick ass. great job bro. i really like this kind of music

very nice man. this would be so suitable for like a video game track =))

some of the weirdest ive ever heard . big ups for creativity
but really, this needs a solid kick pattern all through out. i mean just think of playing this in a club or somethin. how do you expect people to really move ??

very nice man. you could mix it a bit better i think. also the bass can use some more effects to make it more dirty. good job bro

very nice vibes man. but i think you could have done more by adding more different sounds. also some panning with the high end stuff might sound nice.
good job and continue

its very loud which is good but i think the drop could have hit harder.. also you could have made it a bit longer :p
good job bro, merry christmas

if you want to make this a soft track you should make the drums much quieter. i feel they are louder than the main melody. the track is good but i think it has too much / loud drums.
great job

man i like this alot, its like listening to some deadmau5 thing or somethin
sounds very professional.. great job