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Check me New Track fubar - Savaged

Post by fubar » Tue Dec 06, 2005 10:43 pm

Hello everyone, jus finished a track, tell us if you're liking it :D all feedback welcome, cheers!

Link :arrow: http://rasclatt.image-upload.org/Savaged.mp3

if you want a wav jus ask, cheers

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Post by fubar » Wed Dec 07, 2005 3:25 pm

bumpyer :arrow:

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Post by deepfreeze » Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:34 pm

it's ok,.. don't realy feel it thow,... sorry

and i can't realy hear the bass on my laptop..

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Post by andythetwig » Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:46 pm

I'm not surprised you can't hear bass on your laptop... unless it's equipped with subwoofers... now there's an idea ;)

I'm definitely feeling the second bit, when the initial straight breakbeat dissolves into the slower halfstep beat... liking some of those drifty samples at this point.

Some of the synths sound a bit twee, and the melodies are a bit conventional. The last note of the 4bar bassline goes up, not sure i like it... In general, more FX all around!

I reckon you can get it 100% more sinistre!

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Post by fubar » Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:42 pm

cool, cheers for feedback, back to ze drawing board :D :arrow:

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Post by dubweiser » Thu Dec 08, 2005 3:20 am

Nice. But the tune's a bit empty in some parts and you need a stronger kick IMHO.
I agree with andythetwig you can get it more sinistre. Keep up the good work. :wink:

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