My First Dubstep Track/Remix Looking For Some Feedback

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jonnybouta
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My First Dubstep Track/Remix Looking For Some Feedback

Post by jonnybouta » Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:19 pm

Hey Whats good,
This is my first dubstep track I'm putting back there looking for some feedback. Its a Remix of a Kid Cudi Song Called The Prayer...

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Anyways let me know what ya think.
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-toxiK
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Re: My First Dubstep Track/Remix Looking For Some Feedback

Post by -toxiK » Mon Jan 10, 2011 12:06 am

Not bad man, I enjoyed the listen. Good for a first!
Check out my stuff :) I've only started recently and done a few tracks.

http://soundcloud.com/toxikdubs/

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eldoogle
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Re: My First Dubstep Track/Remix Looking For Some Feedback

Post by eldoogle » Mon Jan 10, 2011 12:39 am

Seems like your synth part doesn't fit with the funerals original guitars. Like the notes you write. It isn't terrible, and I guess it doesn't have to be the same but your notes and the guitar doesn't complement each other. Work at it!

simongeorgyd
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Re: My First Dubstep Track/Remix Looking For Some Feedback

Post by simongeorgyd » Mon Jan 10, 2011 1:48 am

Intro's nice and so is the vocal. Your main synth though leaves alot to be desired as do the drums! I can see what your'e trying to do but in my humble opinion the drop needs much more dirt and a sub bass...

jonnybouta
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Re: My First Dubstep Track/Remix Looking For Some Feedback

Post by jonnybouta » Mon Jan 10, 2011 4:57 pm

@toxiK Sounds pretty legit... I will have to give them a better listen with some more feedback over the next couple days.

@eldoogle Thanks for the feedback I will look into some different notes I was pretty satisfied with them but I can definitely see where you are coming from.

@simongeorgyd Thanks for the feedback holmes... This is definitely a rough mix I have left a lot to be mastered. My plans for it at this point are to work on the percussion and drums on the build ups make them a bit more interesting... Also to make a lot more dramatic drop... The drums and percussion should help but I agree a really filthy sub bass would sound sick on the drop.. This I think will be my next addition to the song.

Thanks all for your feedback... I appreciate it as I get some more time over the next day or two Im going to have to come back in and give some feedback. If any of you have a particular song I'd love to give it a listen.
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