[mp3] new track, criticise

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[mp3] new track, criticise

Post by nickb » Wed Apr 11, 2007 5:45 pm


Heres a new track I've just started, got a basic track down, not totally finished. Anyone have any ideas about what to do with it or whats good or not good? thanks.

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Post by zehl freebass » Wed Apr 11, 2007 10:24 pm

thats sounding ill to me, only i thing i could tell you is to add some vocal samples somewhere? it would also lend to the name of the song if you can find something along those lines.. other than that, its def sounding tight and well produced.. really feeling the bassline..


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Post by emu » Wed Apr 11, 2007 10:47 pm

sounds good! feelin it...

would have liked to heard a bassline change up in there somewhere and it ends kind of abruptly but other than that sounding tight
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Post by octave_noize » Wed Apr 11, 2007 11:05 pm

aii good shit mate. not sure what constructive critisism i can give,all soundin good on the laptop speakers, so ill leave it as that!

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Post by drum syndicate » Thu Apr 12, 2007 5:42 am

i dig the overall vibe of the tune. solid solid and LOUD in the mixdown which really got my attention. i'll give it a rinse 2m and see how it sounds on a system. bass sounds heavy and i like the hi hats runnin thru the tune. :D:

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Post by nickb » Thu Apr 12, 2007 8:12 am

thanks for the feedback, yeah i didnt quite finish it before i posted it so its only a near final copy but il get it finished sometime soon and make it more mixable etc. cheers


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