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OralB
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What Do You Guys Think?

Post by OralB » Sun Feb 17, 2013 12:14 am

Hey everyone! So I just finished up a few tracks. I'm just starting out so of course these are kind of sloppy, not very technical at all and need mastering. I would love to hear what you guys think. Also, I'm still having a hard time deciding on what genre on Soundcloud to put these in. Thanks!

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Re: What Do You Guys Think?

Post by Illdillusions » Sun Feb 17, 2013 12:17 am

nice growls you got going
Some smoothing out would be nice though.

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Re: What Do You Guys Think?

Post by mik3 » Sun Feb 17, 2013 1:13 am

Pretty good, i like the female vocal oooo sample! You need to take the lower 200hz? EQ off the main growls, maybe turn them down a touch or take the amp down a touch. just take the low freq off a few sounds and let the sub bass shine through and sound quality will go up 100% bro
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Re: What Do You Guys Think?

Post by kaiori breathe » Sun Feb 17, 2013 2:22 am

Song 4: Nice chord sequence on the intro, bass is alright, but i'd maybe work on a few more layers to it, to give it a little more oompfh, it's a little plain, the next section at the 36 second mark sounds great, nice arps, but i think the transition is a bit sudden and not as well crafted as it could be. Transition into the next is good though, sounds good when it all comes together. Liking those almost nintendo-esque mini lead parts. Overall it's a good job.

Next song has a great intro imo, very cool distorted digital sounds, melody is right on point, femal vox are kinda cool, fit in nicely, drop is solid. I'd maybe bring the distorted digital sounds down a little in the mix when they next appear though, or just down in general throughout, they sound a little overwhelming.

Yea over all nice work. Thumbs up.

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Re: What Do You Guys Think?

Post by OralB » Mon Feb 18, 2013 1:59 am

Thank you so much for the feedback, incredibly helpful! I will fix those tracks up tonight. Thanks again!

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Re: What Do You Guys Think?

Post by andopolis » Mon Feb 18, 2013 2:19 pm

the first one needs more variation and direction, it just sort of wanders off.
i dig the second one more, cool sounds.

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